Sething Darkness (Rated PG-17)

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The Shining

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With My Character Luko!
Seen July 2nd, 2006
Posted June 30th, 2006
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Hi! This is a AU/Dark Pokemon Fanfiction. AU because it takes places in another world other then the Anime or Video Game Pokemon World. Dark because there are a lot of twisted dark ideas in this story starting right here in the first Chapter. This is Rated PG-17 for Bad Language and some bloody battles.

Anyway, I hope you all like my story.

Chapter 1: Of Pokemon And Power

"Lets go, Bre!" yelled seventeen year-old Yuka Starz. "You can do it!"

The Umbreon glared towards its target. A loney female Nidoran.

"Tackle!" Yuka yelled. "Then follow it up with a Shadow Ball!"

"BRE ON!" the Dark type Eeveelution yelled and rammed into the small poison type knocking it down. It returned to starting position and powered up a purple/black colored ball of dark enegry then let it out.

"NI!" the female Nindoran screamed falling to the ground, knocked out.

"Good job, Bre!" Yuka said running over to her Pokemon. She then looked over towards the Nindoran, who was still knocked out. "Time to end this," she continued. She took out a Great Ball and threw it at the Nidoran. The ball moved around for a few seconds and then beeped once, stopping.

Yuka sighed and stepped back. "Just one more Pokemon taken out of the wild," she brushed a strand of brown hair out of her bright blue eyes. "Not that I care anyway." She started to walk back along the path. "Come on, Bre."

"Eon!" the Umbreon said, running over to his master.

But what the two did not know was that there was something evil in the world.

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Else where, a male trainer with short cut black hair rode a Rapidash along a rocky mountain pass. He seemed to be in a hurry as well as looking for something or someone.

"You can stop looking for me, Ian," a evil yet calm sounding voice said. "I'm right here."

Another male trainer walked out from behide a giant rock. He had long silver hair going down to the middle of his back. The most strangest thing about him were his eyes. They just would not stay one color. They kelpt changing from a light blue to a dark blue, to a light green and then a evil red. "Do you have the Powertra Stone I asked you to find?"

"Yes," the trainer known as Ian said taking out a small crystal stone. "But I don't know why you need it...its just a stone."

"Just a stone you say?" the man said taking the stone. "I don't think so."

"Why did you want it in the first place, Luko?" Ian said watching as the nineteen year-old young man toss the stone into the air catching it. "There are many of those Powertra Stones in this world. There common."

"You say they are common," Luko said. "But some common things are rare," he tossed the stone back into the air and cought it again. "But priceless."

"Like a Moonstone..." Ian said but trailed off when Luko stared at him with those forever changing eyes of his.

"No, Ian," Luko said closing his eyes. "Powertra Stones are nothing like Moonstone," he sighed dreamly. "They have a power all there own."

"And you want this power?"

Luko opened his eyes after hearing Ian's strange quistion. Then narrowed them evily, "Yes and a lot more."

"But how do you take on there power," Ian said. "They say the power is within the stone."

"Correct..." Luko continued.

"But the power is within the stone..." Ian said starting to get confused. "Not you."

Luko stared at Ian eyes narrowed. "Not in me you say?"

Then Ian saw Luko do something he would never forget. Luko swallowed the Powertra Stone. After the stone was down Luko looked over towards Ian.

"YOU SEE!" he yelled with a insane glare in his color changing eyes. "All I have to do is find every single Powertra Stone in the whole **** world and if I have all of them within me...I'll have all there power as well."

Ian started to shake. Then fainted in a heap on the hot rocky ground.

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Notes: There is the first chapter. I hope this will be a good story. Please tell me what you all think of it.

Taemin

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o__o Wow...that jumped into the main plot fast..
Even so, interesting concept. I like Ian, he amuses me. x3 (Changing eye color!)
Anyhoo, it was pretty. It wasn't the most descriptive of story, but it wasn't bad... it had enough to manage.

I wanna see what happens. x3


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Intresting concept indeed, though it lacked description and jumped to the plot... rather quickly. However, I enjoyed it. And, not to worry, I'll be done with the pictures soon.

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The Shining

I like the design of my avater

With My Character Luko!
Seen July 2nd, 2006
Posted June 30th, 2006
178 posts
16.9 Years
Thanks for all the nice reviews. I'm glad all of you are liking my story so far. I decided to make this chapter a little earlier. This chapter will go more into what the plot of this story is. Here is the next chapter.

Chapter 2: Lost And Gained

A young girl, about ten years old is walking though the forest right outside of town. Her name is Rita. Her hair was a very light blonde and her eyes a bright green. Tied around her neck was a string and tied to the string was a crystal stone. A Powertra Stone. It was the only thing she had of her Mother since she passed away. Ever since she lived in a town at the base of the Sunset Mountain Range. She wondered out of the forest and onto the hard rocky pass going up into the mountains.

"Your going into danger filled land," came a voice behind her.

Rita turned to see a seventeen year old boy run up to her. His short black hair lightly blew in the cold mountain wind.

"Well," Rita started.

"Allow me to take you home," the boy said. "Whats your name?"

"I'm Rita."

"I'm Ian," the boy said. "Come I'll take you home. Your from the village right?"

But what the two did not know was that they were not alone. Ian heard a noise behind him and turned to see Luko leaning againest a rocky wall. Ian glared at the nineteen year old and then turned back to Rita and noticed her Powertra Stone tied to the string. He knew why Luko was here. He wanted Rita's Powertra Stone.

"Time to set things right," he said and sent out his Rapidash. Once on he grabbed hold of Rita and pulled her on. After one last look towards Luko he shot off towards town.

"Who is that?" Rita said pointing to Luko.

"No one you should know," Ian said and sped his fire horse Pokemon up.

Back where Luko was the nineteen year old's color changing eyes stopped at red and glowed.

Ian was to busy contorling his Rapidash and Rita was holding on to him that they did not see Rita's Powertra Stone glow red and vanish. After they had gotten far enough Ian got off and turned to help Rita down. Then and only then he noticed that the ten year old's Powertra Stone was missing.

"RITA!" he gasped.

Rita looked towards her necklace and burst into tears. "M-my Powertra Stone! That was the only thing left to me by my Mother."

Ian looked back the way they had came and knew "Luko..." he said angerly.

"I don't get it," Rita said. "Whose Luko?"

"I'll explain when we get to town," Ian said. He then got back on his horse Pokemon and pulled Rita up. "What ever Luko is planning it can not be good."

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The two entered the town and were soon met with Yuka Starz, her Umbreon nicknamed Bre, and two unknown teenage boys.

"There you are, Rita," she said. "You know village rules you are not allowed to travel off alone.

"Sorry," Rita said.

One of the two boys noticed Rita's missing treasure. "Hay, Rita," he said. "Where is your stone?"

Ian spoke up, "I'll explian. Let go inside I have a lot to say."

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Once inside the five grouped together and Ian began. "Theres this guy I know," he began. "His name is Luko. I thought he was a nice guy but...he has set something very fearful in motion."

"What?" Yuka said.

"The Powertra Stones," Ian said. "Do you know about them?"

"Yes," Yuka continued. "Arn't they these powerful gemstones that came from other world to protect this one?"

"Yes," Ian said. "And from what I know they are very powerful."

"But what about this Luko person," said one of the two boys who was known as Jack.

"Yeah," his best friend Chris said. "What is he about?"

"He is part human and part demon," Ian said. "Mostly human but his eyes...they change color. That marks him as being part demon. He is after the Powertra Stones."

"Does he want there power?" said Yuka.

"Yes."

"And how is he getting there power?" Rita asked.

Ian then got mad. "That jerk tricked me into finding him the first Powertra Stone and then he...he....he ATE it."

"Luko ate the Powertra Stone?" Jack said.

"Yes and he is not stopping there," Ian continued. "He plans to take in ALL of the Powertra Stones."

"He can't possibly eat all of them," Yuka said. "There are a ton of them...maybe more."

"Like I said he is part demon," Ian said. "He told me he does not gain weight. He stays thin. But the stones will build up. He told me it will reselt in a feeling."

"What kind of feeling?" Rita said.

"A very intence feeling of being over stuffed," Ian said. "We have to stop him because as well as protect the world they contorl the Legendaries."

"You mean," Yuka said shocked.

"Yes," Ian said. "If he keeps eating Powertra Stones the Legendaries will be throwen into battle...that may distroy the whole world."

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Notes: I hope you learned alot from this chapter.
I like the art work style in my avater.
I like DARK Fanfiction.
I like making up my own Pokemon.
Age 31
In waiting.
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Posted January 19th, 2008
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She wandered out of the forest and onto the hard rocky pass going up into the mountains.
Wandering and wondering were mixed up.

"Yes," Ian said. "If he keeps eating Powertra Stones the Legendaries will be thrown into battle...that may destroy the whole world."
A couple of typos I found. Other than that, it's interesting.

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The Shining

I like the design of my avater

With My Character Luko!
Seen July 2nd, 2006
Posted June 30th, 2006
178 posts
16.9 Years
This is getting good. I'll stick with one chapter a day. In the first few chapters it would seem like the plot comes out more. Now here is Chapter 3.

Chapter 3: What Is It Like?

Rita looked out of the window. Her only reminder of her Mother was gone. Everyone else had since went to bed. The town was for those who had lost there famlies like Rita had. Her Father died when she was younger and when her Mother died she was left alone.

"Nice night isn't it?" said a calm but kind of evil voice.

Rita spun around and saw Luko. How had he gotten inside. She backed away but remembered what Ian had told her.

"Where is it?" she said. "Where is my Powertra Stone?"

Luko turned his head to look sideways and closed his eyes "Right in front of you."

"But...I don't see..." Rita said.

But she knew. If Luko was infront of her so were the Powertra Stone that was once hers. He had eaten it. But just then the door opened and Yuka entered. She took one look at Luko. Even if they had not met she knew.

"LUKO?" she half screamed half quistioned the nineteen year old demon/human.

In a flash Yuka was tossed out of the room and the door flew shut. She began banging on it. "LUKO! LEAVE RITA ALONE!"

Rita stared at Luko in shock. "How did you?"

Luko did not reply. He grabbed hold of Rita and teleported out of the building. Just when the door opened and Yuka burst in. Seeing the room empty she ran to get help.

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Rita was tied up in the middle a room within one of the cave systems of the mountains. Luko was in front of her.

"Why do you want me?" she said.

"Your my ticket to getting what I want," Luko said.

"Would that be more Powertra Stones?" Rita guessed.

Luko laughed and then looked away "Smart girl."

"I'll never help you!" Rita yelled.

Rita was then surrounded by four flames. Then they vanished.

"You will help me!" Luko yelled.

"H-how did you do that?" Rita said.

"Simple," Luko said. "I call on the Powertra Stones."

"The ones you ate?"

"Yes," Luko said.

"But...where do you keep them?" Rita asked. Stupid quistion.

"I ate them didn't I," Luko said. "There is only one place they go."

"Oh," Rita said. "But they don't stay..." she started.

"They don't digest," Luko said.

"Then how do you stay thin?" Rita said.

"Whats with you and those stupid quistions?" Luko said annoyed. "But I'll answer. The stones have power. Thats how."

Rita thought about this. The Powertra Stones did not digest which ment they were still in Luko. But she still had quistions. "How does it feel?"

"How does what feel," Luko said. He was getting more annoyed with this girl.

"The Powertra Stones. The ones you already ate."

Luko began to walk slowly towards her answering along the way. "Like Ian told you I feel overly stuffed 24 hours a day. Gets worse with every stone I take in. But there are a lot of things you and your friends don't know."

Rita did not know how Luko would know that Ian told her and the others about some of this. Did the Powertra Stones make him psychic as well? "Like what?"

Luko didn't answer. Just gave Rita a evil glare. But Rita knew.

"You have more then two...don't you," she said angerly.

Luko nodded. "I've been doing this for two years."

"H-how many Powertra Stones have you taken in?" she asked.

"9,0000000," came Luko's answer.

Rita gasped. This was getting confusing. The stones did not digest yet Luko had eaten over nine million of them. He didn't gain weight. Stayed thin. But had NINE MILLOIN Powertra Stones in him...and was going after more. She could only guess how the overly stuffed feeling was making him feel. But Rita knew one thing. She had to get out of there.

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Notes: I bet you guys found out a lot more in this chapter. ^_^

The Shining

I like the design of my avater

With My Character Luko!
Seen July 2nd, 2006
Posted June 30th, 2006
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Well, there is now a picture of Luko. There is going to be a change of plot in this chapter. Please tell me what you think.

Chapter 4: From Evil To Good

"There has to be something we can do," Yuka said as she, Ian, Jack, and Chris talked in another room. "Rita is like a sister to me."

Ian was reading a book at the time called Hidden Worlds: Legends and More when he spotted something he was reading.

"I think I know what may be going on," he said.

"What are you reading?" Jack asked Ian.

"Listen," Ian replied and read from the book.

"Out of all the worlds there is one that could be filled with light and good but some say it is filled with Darkness and Evil. Some even say that the evil will enter another world. This world is known as Sonar Powertra."

"Wait?" Yuka said Sonar Powertra like the Powertra Stones?"

"It says that they came from that world," Ian continued.

"Is there anything else?" Chris said.

Ian read a little more and stopped. "Lets go!"

"Go where?" Yuka said.

"To where Luko is something tells me there is more to this and I think I can set things right."

Everyone got up and followed Ian out the door, out of town, and into the mountain range.

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Luko walked around Rita. "Have you decided to help me or not?"

Rita said nothing.

"ANSWER!" Luko yelled.

Rita still did not answer.

"You asked for it!" Luko yelled and powered up a beam like attack.

"Stop right there Luko!" someone yelled and Yuka along with Ian, Jack, and Chris appeared in the caves opening.

"Looks like more people to see there little friend here die!" Luko said.

Ian stepped over to Luko. "Who ever you are I know one thing...you are not Luko!"

Luko stared back confused.

"You are nothing but a demon...a demon from the world of Sonar Powertra," Ian continued.

"NO!" Luko yelled but everyone then knew that it was not Luko. A black shadowy being floated from Luko and vanished. The Luko fell to the ground.

Yuka ran over and cought him. "There," she said to the older teen. "Your ok now. Its gone."

Luko opened his eyes which were no longer changing from blue, to dark blue, to green, and then to red. His eyes were just one color. Dark blue.

"Thanks..." Luko said weakly. And then "The Powertra Stone..."

"What about them?" Ian said.

"There still in me..."

Everyone took a step back. The demon that made Luko evil was gone and Luko was normal again...well...not really normal. He still had all nine million Powertra Stones inside of him.

"Are you ok?" Yuka said to luko.

"Yes," Luko said. "Just very full. Thats all."

"The demon was able to handle the full feeling," Ian said. "But it seems Luko can't."

"Shut up!" Luko yelled. "I can handle myself just fine thank you!"

"Well," Jack said. "If this is the real Luko he sure has a temper at times."

Yuka helped Luko up. "Want to come back to town with us or do you have a home to get back to?"

At this Luko turned away. "I have no home."

"What do you mean?" Yuka said.

"I was left alone at the age of ten," Luko explained. "It was not till I was seventeen when the demon found me and I started eating Powertra Stones."

"How old are you now?" Chris asked.

"Nineteen," Luko said.

"Well," Yuka said. "How about this? You can stay at the Sun Set Closer. Its this hotel like place where anyone who wants to can live for free. How about it, Luko? Put the past behind you and join the group?"

"I'd love to," Luko said. "Thanks."

With that they left the cave not knowing that a new evil was coming...and Luko was the only one who may just save the world.

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Notes: There is the chapter. Please tell me what you think. If you want to see a picture of Luko. There is a link to one in my signature.
I like the art work style in my avater.
I like DARK Fanfiction.
I like making up my own Pokemon.

Taemin

MOVE

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Posted December 9th, 2022
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9,0000000?? o__o thats a bit overboard...but thats the only thing that I found off...
The rest of the story is really good, plote wise. But I don't really think of it as Pokemon related most of the time, unless they're mentioned... Like with the whole 'Powereta Stone controlling the Legendaries' thing..

It seems like more a videogame actually... with the way its scripted out.

Even so, Amusing story. x3


I can't leave this spot that's empty without you
It's an area that no one else can fill
The night's never gonna be the same.

SHINee - Area

paired to Palamon

The Shining

I like the design of my avater

With My Character Luko!
Seen July 2nd, 2006
Posted June 30th, 2006
178 posts
16.9 Years
Now for Chapter 5. I'm still going with the one chapter a day guide. Hope you like it.

Chapter 5: No Room Left

Yuka could not stop thinking about how Luko was feeling. She knew he was overly stuffed but she wanted to know he was ok. She walked into the room where Luko was resting and noticed he was there on the bed laying on his back with one hand on his stomach.

"You ok?" Yuka asked.

"Yeah," Luko replied.

"I know you must feel very full," Yuka continued.

"More then that," Luko said. "It feels like there is no room left."

"What do you mean?" Yuka said.

Luko mentioned for her to come over and took her hand so she could feel. Yuka pulled away.

"They are really there!" she said in shock. "There must be a lot of them. You feel very hard there."

"Over nine million," Luko said.

"How do they all fit?"

"Its kind of a illusion the stones give off," Luko explained. "Its that same illusion that makes it so I don't gain weight."

"I hope you feel better then," Yuka said.

Luko looked away. "The full feeling is never going to pass. It'll stay forever."

"How long is forever?"

"Its different for you and me," Luko repiled. "I'm immortal."

"But immortal means..."

"That I will never die," Luko said.

"Oh, Luko!" Yuka said. "I didn't know that! You mean you will always feel full till the world ends!"

"Calm down," Luko continued. "There is a way to make everything feel better."

"How?"

Luko's hand had never really left his stomach he moved his hand in a circle in a rubbing motion. "This calms the stones."

"Then everything is fine," Yuka asked.

"Yes," Luko said.

Yuka left the room.

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The next morning Ian was riding his Rapidash though the town when he noticed Luko standing near a tree. He was calming the Powertra Stones as he called rubbing, touching, or patting his stomach but he was also staring at Ian.

"Where are you going so early?"

Ian stopped and looked towards Luko. "Nothing that matters you."

It seemed that Luko and Ian were what people called rivals. They alomst never got along.

Luko stopped calming the Powerta Stones ending it in a quick tap. "Lets see if you fire horse Pokemon can beat me."

"Your on!" Ian yelled. "Fire Storm! Flamethrower!"

Ian's Rapidash now known as Fire Storm sent a blast of Fire at Luko. Luko vanished. Disappeared in a flash of light!

"HAY!" Ian yelled. "Where are you!"

"Up here," came Luko's voice.

Ian turned towards a tree. Luko was on the highest branch again calming the Powertra Stones.

"Stop that!" Ian said.

"Stop what!" Luko yelled back.

"Stop calming the Powertra Stones!" Ian continued.

"No..." Luko said just trying to get Ian mad.

"How about you stop that, Ian?" came a voice and they turned to see that Yuka was walking towards Ian. "When Luko calms the Powertra Stones...its something that he has to do."

"Well..." Ian started then saw the look Yuka was giving him. "I'll be going now." He left.

Luko flew off the tree branch landing next to Yuka still contining to calm the Powertra Stones then stopped. Yuka had leanred that when he was calming the stones he always ended with two small taps.

"Don't listen to anything Ian says," Yuka said. "He just can get to the fact that your on our side now."

Luko nodded. "Or maybe he just does not like me."

"We'll see..." Yuka said.

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Notes: Another chapter done! ^_^ Please tell me what you think.
I like the art work style in my avater.
I like DARK Fanfiction.
I like making up my own Pokemon.

Taemin

MOVE

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USA
Seen January 6th, 2023
Posted December 9th, 2022
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Hmmmm, interesting chapter.
((It still reminds me of a videogame!))
I've had this feeling since chapter 2 or 3 that Yuka and Luko were gonna be a couple.... Lesse if it happens. x3


I can't leave this spot that's empty without you
It's an area that no one else can fill
The night's never gonna be the same.

SHINee - Area

paired to Palamon

Rioku_Zanketa

...::Ultimate Warrior::...

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I live in the arena.
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Hmmmm, interesting chapter.
((It still reminds me of a videogame!))
I've had this feeling since chapter 2 or 3 that Yuka and Luko were gonna be a couple.... Lesse if it happens. x3
I dunno 'bout the video game thing(....well,kinda...) but I agree with you about thinking that those two seem like they're getting persional....:laugh:
Gone with the wind, just like my memories.
~Rioku Zanketa