Adventures of a Poochyena Page 2

Started by StarryLatiasGirl June 15th, 2006 2:11 PM
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Smarties-chan

Should've had that name change

Age 21
Seen September 12th, 2015
Posted September 5th, 2009
3,966 posts
18.4 Years
The story isn't very original in my opinion. =\ Also, the dialogue between Thrush and his mother doesn't seem very natural. But maybe it's just me...
The bios seem very lacking, too. I have seen many comics with lazily written bios, but I see no reason for you to do the same.

On the plus side, the spritework is above average and the comic set up is really original, too. n_n
And that Skitty just plain pwns! =D I seem to have a strange liking to characters who say ''nyahaha''. O.o

It's not good, but definitely not bad either. Keep it up.

Evil Ducky

I can feel a pulse in my butt!

how should i no? i mean, im not ME of all people!!
Seen February 18th, 2007
Posted January 16th, 2007
32 posts
17.2 Years
wow... awsome comic! you should do more! the sprites are so cool, too! you are an awsome spriter and i hope you do more. and you must have a great computer program to be able to do that stuff. sorry i reapeted myself a bit there. and that im aa bad speller.
Age 31
Male
Portland, Oregon
Seen October 6th, 2012
Posted March 8th, 2011
442 posts
18 Years
Wow, I don't care what Solemnity says, this comic is great. And I don't see "My parents are dead, I want revenge" as "a boring old story", I think of it as "Classic". Keep up the good work!
PM me if you'd like to hear some of the ideas I have for ROM hacks. I've got some subplot ideas and Fakemon that I really want in a hack... as long as I don't have do the whole hack. xD

Poke my eggs?
Linkin Park - Blackout | Pendulum - Watercolour
Age 32
England
Seen December 31st, 2009
Posted December 31st, 2009
1,186 posts
17.8 Years
This have a lot of potential, in terms of looks and the characters themselves. However, Thrush's odd appearence has left me wondering: Where did the pidgey DNA come from? How come his parents don't have wings and he does?

I hope these questions will be answered later in the comic, and that you won't stick too closely to the 'parents die, will revenge them' cliche.

"Bring yours buckets by the dozens,
bring your nieces and your cousins,
come put out the fire on me."


I claimed Zubat in the pokemon claim thread
Most adorable pokemon ever <3
Male
Seen 5 Days Ago
Posted August 21st, 2021
5,853 posts
17 Years
At the moment, I can't say much about the story, hopefully it pans out good though.

But what I really love about this comic is the excellent use of sprites, especially the amount of custom poses you made for Thrush. It's rare to see artwork as beautiful as this for sprite comics. I hope you continue to create more custom poses for other characters of the comic. Have you tried folding Thrush's wings?

Please do not let your very apparent and obvious spriting talent go to waste with a terrible storyline though, as that'd be a real shame.

Keep it up!!!