Poke-Mon Page 4

Started by Chizzy June 24th, 2006 7:32 AM
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Posted August 21st, 2021
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17 Years
While your comic does draw a chuckle, I feel that it is unestablished. That is, we don't know enough about the characters. I'd personally like to see an eppy or so that explains why Daniel Burnt the forest down.

And actually, the jokes are kinda forced. For example, in eppy no. 9, you had to push your joke, which otherwise would not have been funny if you didn't add the hint. Moreover, I don't know if you've realised, but cliches are generally not funny - but then again, anything with Mr T is.

Keep it up.

Chizzy

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Age 31
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Seen October 27th, 2010
Posted June 22nd, 2010
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17.6 Years
I don't think i did realise Ray Z, otherwise i may of not called it 'Cliched'!

Thanks GLL... Mr T was just because they're getting on a boat, and if you remember, 'I ain't gettin' on no plane!' was one of his catchphrases in the A-Team.

Expect Maybe two new episodes today.
Now you could remember me...

Then Again...

...its been a while

Chizzy

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Age 31
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Seen October 27th, 2010
Posted June 22nd, 2010
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Yeah... That is Mr T. Well... Time to do some affilation... Im going to post the Banner Solemnity Made so that you can put it in your signatures guys later, and before that though, Im making the next episode. When shall I make it? How about Now???
Now you could remember me...

Then Again...

...its been a while

Sweet Smoochum

Banned

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Seen April 13th, 2013
Posted March 9th, 2013
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17.4 Years
I like your fan art, Solemnity! Here's mine...


It took me 5-7 minutes to make it...

Edit: I almost forgot to give credit! Click spoiler to see...

Spoiler:
Credit goes to Maneachicken for the design and colours of Daniel's trainer sprite and Spriter's resource for Voltorb's colours.

Sweet Smoochum

Banned

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NEW JERSEY, Sayreville. 08872.
Seen April 13th, 2013
Posted March 9th, 2013
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My fan art was made as a joke :S
Mine sort of was, too, because Orby is really known to be a boy pokemon; (as it says in his biography) but since the Orby I made kind of seems girl-like, I added text to it and made him say that he was really a girl.

(Wow, what a long explaination for something that took me 5-7 minutes to make!)

Chizzy

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Age 31
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Seen October 27th, 2010
Posted June 22nd, 2010
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Mr Profit. Its Handy If you do say something. Lets start with something simple. Did you like it?

Solemnity...We love MS Paint! It looks cool and random!

GLL...A sexual Inuendo...I just had a thought. New charachter Alert...In my head. and thanks...I'll put them in My first Post.
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Then Again...

...its been a while
Dunno,mabye in comic world
Seen November 20th, 2006
Posted November 20th, 2006
278 posts
17 Years
I like your fan art, Solemnity! Here's mine...


It took me 5-7 minutes to make it...

Edit: I almost forgot to give credit! Click spoiler to see...

Spoiler:
Credit goes to Maneachicken for the design and colours of Daniel's trainer sprite and Spriter's resource for Voltorb's colours.
Nice art,Lily!I shoud go make some...
Thanks Haunter Master

<-Da Best Comic Eva!

donavannj

Age 32
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'cause it get cold like Minnesota
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Tommorow I promise guys...
That now means sometime within the next 7 or 8 hours, depending on how many hours ahead your time-zone is of mine, which is the American CST.
whoops

Chizzy

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Age 31
UK
Seen October 27th, 2010
Posted June 22nd, 2010
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Episode 11 is here...

11. Seasick

For the next episode we get a flashback to burning down the forrest.

IDEA
Im planning on making a sort of Video version of the episode i just did. What do you guys think?

IDEA TWO
New charachter I mentioned earlier. As well as 'Luke' and 'Chiz' entering the fray there will be Ms Ditto. She is a French Ditto that has been left on the ship for years, after getting sucked through parrallel universes and accidently turned herself into a Bagette, and forgetting how to turn back.
Now you could remember me...

Then Again...

...its been a while

obelisk-kun

GO HINATA KICK NEJI'S ASS!!!!!

Age 27
cheering on hinata-san
Seen September 1st, 2006
Posted August 23rd, 2006
3,048 posts
18.1 Years
Episode 11 is here...

11. Seasick

For the next episode we get a flashback to burning down the forrest.

IDEA
Im planning on making a sort of Video version of the episode i just did. What do you guys think?

IDEA TWO
New charachter I mentioned earlier. As well as 'Luke' and 'Chiz' entering the fray there will be Ms Ditto. She is a French Ditto that has been left on the ship for years, after getting sucked through parrallel universes and accidently turned herself into a Bagette, and forgetting how to turn back.
idea two is going to be funny.

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