The Groudon/Kyogre Disaster

Started by Professor Pine July 3rd, 2006 12:01 PM
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What would happen if you weren't there in emerald to rescue hoenn?

The Groudon/Kyogre Disaster


Part 1 - The Disaster

Groudon and Kyogre circled each other before attacking. Lighting was everywhere. The battle showed no sign of ending. Then an Exacute fell into the beams of power and deflected Groundons beam. The Exacute went flying away by the blast but Groudon exploded. I was the only survivor from soolapis, I was shielded behind Kyogre. Kyogre swam away quickly. The tidal wave by the blast destroyed much of hoenn and lots of the rest of the world were devastated. Half a hour later I heard another explosion. Only later did I know this was hoenn's great volcano, Mt. Chimmeley, destroyed by Kyogre. This did even more damage than the first explosion. Kyogre swam off again. All the while the whole world was filling up with water. It seemed like the end of the world!

Part 2 - The Saviour

The great trainers of the world got together to try and work out a plan. They however were stuck until a quite new but amazing trainer Wally came up with a plan. He went to Orre to find three legendary pokemon, Deepce, Surfatron and Estacic. He got them to agree to his plan and they went to Kyogres next target, Mt. Battle. Most of Orre was already flooded. As Kyogre came up to Mt. Battle the three legendaries plus Wally’s pokemon managed to collapse the mountain and crush Kyogre. The world was saved, but only just.

Part 3 - The Effect

The effect was colossus. Most of Hoenn had been destroyed and other places were not lightly of as well. The flat low lying region of Orre was completely flooded leaving only a few inlands. In time it became known as the Oceanic region. But there was another problem. When Mt. Chimmley blew up tons of polcan dust got thrown into the atmosphere. Polcan dust is poisonous to a few pokemon and causes cancers in many others. Tentacool became exscint and had to be remade from fossils when the dust had gone. Magicarp almost died out and the remaining ones were much more powerful. The seas were almost empty for a while but were soon colonized by new pokemon evolved from land pokemon. Therefore we ended up with a huge variety of sea pokemon. Wally became the most famous trainer of all time. A small Exacute woke up the day after the disaster to find himself changed, changed into a legendary, Univorsal. The three pokemon Deepce, Surfatron and Estacic worked together to control the seas. The End (or is it?)

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A pokemon fanfiction can be classified in various ways, but many will agree: summaries =/= fanfiction.

From what I am seeing, each part of the trilogy hardly contains any passable effort. True, you took time to meticulously explain every event, but please try to expand it next time. For part one, you can at least write up to a page, but seeing all those details, I wouldn't rush if I were you. Remember that summaries are different from actual stories. Try including dialogues, description and the basic elements of prose next time. Also take a quick peek at the stickied thread if you can. ^_^;

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