Defender of Space: Code: DEOXYS

Started by Tedd July 10th, 2006 12:42 PM
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Seen September 30th, 2006
Posted August 19th, 2006
34 posts
17 Years
Hi people this is my first Pokemon Sprite comic so I hope you guy will like it.

I'm still not sure if I should make it into seasons. I will decide that later.

Chapter 1: Bothersome people
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h169/Teddjino/PokemonCodeDEOXYS1.png

Chapter 2: The Purple Jewel
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h169/Teddjino/PokemonCodeDEOXYS2.png

Chapter 3: Hosting
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h169/Teddjino/PokemonCodeDEOXYS3.png

Chapter 4: A Place to Stay
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h169/Teddjino/PokemonCodeDEOXYS4.png


Age 31
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Portland, Oregon
Seen October 6th, 2012
Posted March 8th, 2011
442 posts
18 Years
This looks good, and I have some criticism: Make some more!
PM me if you'd like to hear some of the ideas I have for ROM hacks. I've got some subplot ideas and Fakemon that I really want in a hack... as long as I don't have do the whole hack. xD

Poke my eggs?
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Seen September 30th, 2006
Posted August 19th, 2006
34 posts
17 Years
I will try to make some more tomorrow. Brother is using the computer I used to make this comic.

EDIT:
Try to connect the speech bubbles to the characters, so you don´t have to put the names. Also, I like very much the main character´s attitude, it remembers me mine
If I connect them it show less of the background. I want to show the background as much as possible.

EDIT: New update!


Seen September 30th, 2006
Posted August 19th, 2006
34 posts
17 Years
Wow, tedd, I like how the plot is going. Oh and when you do a comic panel, please put some boarder's if you can.
Yeah I'll put some boarders around.


Wow it's good so far yea maybe it is better if you attach the speech bubbles it makes it more easier for everyone ^^

altarialover :t334:
Hm...I'm not sure still. I used those speech bubbles because they went with the game. I could still put it in.


Jirbytaylor

is too lazy to make a new ava

Age 33
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Seen February 21st, 2009
Posted June 14th, 2008
51 posts
16.9 Years
This is cool; the only problem I have is that the banner takes too long to load.
Also, I recommend not using things other than sprites in the comic.
Have you ever seen the 10 Commandments of Sprite Comics?