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loverslostintime

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    • Seen Jul 26, 2006
    I was a juvenile,
    It was dark,
    A man came after me,
    In a park,
    He grabbed me,
    Took off my pants,
    He told me he loved me,
    After beating me to a pulp,
    I laid there so sad so slain,
    Feeling worthless,
    lying in the rain,
    tears come so easy,
    after you lost it,
    i thought id save myself,
    but i was robbed.
     

    Sakura~

    flowery
    58
    Posts
    17
    Years
  • It was pretty thought provoking, yet straightforward at the same time. You demonstrate a touchy experience with the poetry, and I like that emotion! Just be aware of providing some structure and remember not to ramble when writing poetry.

    Anywayz, a nice feel to it, neh neh~ :3

    -Mikuru ♥
     
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