Pokemon: Time Travel

Started by Houndoom1 August 21st, 2006 2:19 PM
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Age 30
Someplace on Earth
Seen June 3rd, 2016
Posted February 23rd, 2007
770 posts
17.3 Years
My 7th or 8th comic!
Say hello to..... Pokemon: Time Travel!


Plot:
Tom is a young kid who dosen't realize it, but in the future he is a big hero! Unfortunately a dark evil vialln from the future has set out to destroy Tom's exicstance so before Tom is ta big hero. Tom must adventure past the darkness and mostly the idiotic randomness to save his own existance.

Part 1: Metaknight
Part 2: Nidoran Love
Part 3: Fred

Here's the math:
Posting + Insparation = New Comic

Credits:
Me
Spriters Resource
People That Post
(That's all I used so far)

Banner Made By Me

Domin-8

aka Unoringinally Funny

Age 33
Male
Dela-Where?
Seen January 23rd, 2011
Posted November 3rd, 2010
1,730 posts
17.4 Years
Hahahaha! I really love that episode. It makes me laugh after a hard day's work. It is nice to see you doing a comic again. I need to start one up again:remember me (Used to be coreystranick)? Well anyway, can't wait for the next random installment.



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Tbone2356

Time keeps on tickin' by

Age 29
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New York City
Seen June 4th, 2014
Posted September 13th, 2009
465 posts
17.3 Years
lol that was funny... I wish too see more but I do have a suggestion...

Make the speech bubbles bigger so the text doesnt seem to roll onto the screen, make your jokes open to people newly reading your comics (i didnt get what was so funny aabout the guy in the cape and if hes from you older comic you should state it). and stik to a storyline but add randomness along the way....

goodluck with this comic and ill be back too see more...

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Age 30
Elsewhere
Seen March 2nd, 2007
Posted March 2nd, 2007
101 posts
17.1 Years
i think its knid of like a mel brooks comic, cause heir actually aware that there in a comic. my brothr is a mel brooks fanatic. its sometimes funny, but it starts to get old after a little while, so please make the comic have an actual storyline, pleeese, i beg of u, pleeese
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Cyprus
Seen April 7th, 2016
Posted July 3rd, 2007
145 posts
17.2 Years
ahahahahahahha! Very nice (and funny) comic! Let the jokes be with you :p
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Posted October 28th, 2010
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18.4 Years
It's pretty bad to be honest, you mixed styles, I mean, you can;t put a platform game sprite on an overworld map, with overworld people, it looks stupid. The humour wasn;t exactly good and the breaking of the fourth wall got older than my grandmother, you may also want to use tails on your speech bubbles, you know, like in real comics. And the gay gag isn;t even funny, nor is the constant use of the word at innapropriate times.
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Posted August 21st, 2021
5,853 posts
17 Years
Vaati is right. I can't believe no one even mentioned this.

It's a bad comic. It seriously requires alot of touching up and rethought.

Vaati has basically everything covered, but there's also your comic about how much your comic sucks - BnG made that old when it was first done. Don't try and use self pity to get us too read it. We'll only read it if it's any good.

And at the moment I don't think it is.

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In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
1 word. Random. I hate random comics, most of the time their pointless and boring, much like yours. And the whole gay thing is stupid. Oh, yes, you see the blue panels on the side of your textboxes? Either get rid of them, or don't write over them.

Gaah.
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