Poke Pursuit

Started by Bluefox06 September 24th, 2006 4:20 PM
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Orcan Regions
Seen January 17th, 2007
Posted January 5th, 2007
140 posts
16.9 Years
OK my first sprite comic EVEVER so cut me some slack.
I need some advice so i can make them better if you want.
WARNING: The random comic is not a series.
Also, my comics are very clean. ( Not a bad word in site sep for
like fugly or ZOMG )

Random Comics

Growlithe and Charmander

Poke Pursuit

Plot: A girl named Amy and her new friends take on a journey to wondrous places. They run in to truoble lots or just plain stupid stuff. Later in the series, they find a destucteve pokemon on pursuit and must fight for there lives.

Intro

The journey begins !!!

Who's He ??

New ones are coming soon

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Seen November 19th, 2012
Posted July 30th, 2008
570 posts
17.6 Years
Aw, man... I said that you should've told showed it to me first so i can tell youy some Not-To-Do's such as...

Not saying that it's jsut your first and to cut you some slack
Saving as JPEG
Blurry text, overlapping Boxes and such.
Member Since 10.08.05 ~ Acendo on #thepokecommunity ~ iPhone buddies with wakachamo
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
No offense but this is very poorly made, on top of that you keep saving in JPEG format, it ruins the comic completely, try saving your comics as PNG.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
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Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
Okay I will explain this as easily and simple as I possibly can...they are image file types what you've been saving in is this...

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g149/youtube_2006/Episode1PokePursuit.jpg
Notice the .jpg, and what I save in is .png, understand?
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
No no...when you save your file it asks what file type to save it as...most likely it saves it in bmp and then photobucket changes it to jpeg...so try and save it as a png instead...when it asks you what file type you want to save it as.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card

[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
I agree with the rest, but you might not want to do the --Her house and the --Prof. Oaks house because it's just a waste. Also you have *drumroll*... HORRID RECOLORS!! The text is sometimes cut off, and it gets blurry in jpeg.

Gaah.
This signature is under construction.
But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
-[NP]

[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
Yes, it's in PNG. but it's still pretty darn bad.

HORRIBLE GRAMMAR!!!
You either didn't copy sprites all the way, or you can see pieces of other sprites.
Text is overlapping the box, which are overlapping both eath other and the panel.
Not so good of a plot.
Why is Oak in the corner fo a Poke'Center, and when did Oak greet her, you skipped the conversation 0.o

IN my opinion, even though it has yet to (possibly) get better, 2/10

Gaah.
This signature is under construction.
But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
-[NP]
Age 32
Leafmaple
Seen October 22nd, 2021
Posted May 9th, 2010
467 posts
18.2 Years
...

I got nothing more to say than...you phail at comics.

I ask of you to do either of the following:

1) Leave the comic forum, now.
2) Find a tutorial and study it, HARD.
3) LISTEN to my advice.

1. NEVER. EVER. EVER. Make a comic if you do not know how to spell "bye". EVER.
2. If the comic doesn't show actions...it isn't much of a comic, no?
3. Learn text bubbles. MEMORIZE TEXT BUBBLES.
4. Make a default pannel, and stick to that Pannel. You're obviously not skilled enough to make a comic using different pannel sizes, so use the same one each comic...please..

This is the basic info for now. However, knowing you, you'll start bashing me. Too frikkin bad, if you get worked up about this, you're obviously not ready for the world.
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Orcan Regions
Seen January 17th, 2007
Posted January 5th, 2007
140 posts
16.9 Years
:( huuuu thats just it.
I try to have fun and make people have fun reading my comics but i guees all that hard work was for nothing.
If nobody likes my comics i guess ill just quit and show other people who enjoy having peole try to have fun. :( I guess..... I'm just a loser sigh

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Domin-8

aka Unoringinally Funny

Age 33
Male
Dela-Where?
Seen January 23rd, 2011
Posted November 3rd, 2010
1,730 posts
17.4 Years
Alright, lets see.
1. Use speech bubles instead of boxes next to a picture, makes it easier to read.
2. Everything else everyone else has said.

@Jake:My comic was pretty decent when I first started, some here may remember it was called Pokemon Destiny Arrived, but I got rid of it last year so doubt it is still around on the forum



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Age 32
Male
Seen May 16th, 2011
Posted October 28th, 2010
5,058 posts
18.4 Years
Sheesh, you're whining linke a baby, when i first started spriting the comments I got were 100 times worse than these ones, on a forum where a lot of tough critics and just plain flamers hung out, but I never threw no hissy fit saying "I may aswell just quit" I just stuck to my guns and followed people's advice, even if it was harsh, I still took it with a pinch of salt.

Basically, you need to learn how to spell / use basic grammar, it isn;t that hard to run a spell or grammar check in MS Word. Also don;t use TUP, it looks horrid, as does the comic, basically, you just need an awful lot of practice.