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Started by code zerro the deluge September 27th, 2006 9:54 AM
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Age 29
Maryland
Seen January 14th, 2009
Posted January 27th, 2008
459 posts
18.1 Years
Back again back to the top
All you other wanna bees better stop
Because I am a boss
While you in the club I'm saying ohh my gosh

Shake your money maker like somebody about to pay ya
I see you on my radar act like da playa
Stand next to this brother like A A A
Shake your money maker like somebody bout to pay ya
Don't worry about them haters keep your nose up in the air
Stand next to this brother like A A A

I want to
Do what I really want to
I will make a beat so you can bump to
Going in and out
Upside down
Return of the king while you got a frown so girl


Shake your money maker like somebody about to pay ya
I see you on my radar act like da playa
Stand next to this brother like A A A
Shake your money maker like somebody bout to pay ya
Don't worry about them haters keep your nose up in the air
Stand next to this brother like A A A

Back again in the buisness
My rhymes and my flow shine with crispness
I will be hitting this
Cause your defense is defensless
While you still winless

Shake your money maker like somebody about to pay ya
I see you on my radar act like da playa
Stand next to this brother like A A A
Shake your money maker like somebody bout to pay ya
Don't worry about them haters keep your nose up in the air



Chorus by Pharell my cousin
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http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_rathiasu.gif
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_kaiooga.gif
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_guraadon.gif
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_rekkuuza.gif thanks Hristo Karamanov[/IMG][IMG]http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_myuu.gif[
video games are great until lights go out
( quote great just great)unquote

I was dr.jay

my two sites are http://www.freewebs.com/chimpythelonestar/
and join http://s7.invisionfree.com/Nintendo_Online

Me and Pink-Tiger together.


Phantom of Death is my Brother

Midori Chi my sis-in-law
So is fallen angel

join http://s7.invisionfree.com/Nintendo_Online
In your fridge. No seriously, go look.
Seen October 11th, 2006
Posted October 8th, 2006
7 posts
16.7 Years
Pharrel's your cousin?

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I'm not sure if this poem's based on that song. If it is, great job. If not, then..
[keii]

Tell me what face to wear and I'll paint it;
Show me what view to see but I'll taint it.
Age 29
Maryland
Seen January 14th, 2009
Posted January 27th, 2008
459 posts
18.1 Years
it is. yes pharell is no lie.
[urlhttp://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_myuu.gif[/url]
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_rathiosu_s.gif
http://www.serebiiforums.com/images...ario-sprite.png
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_rathiasu.gif
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_kaiooga.gif
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_guraadon.gif
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_rekkuuza.gif thanks Hristo Karamanov[/IMG][IMG]http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_myuu.gif[
video games are great until lights go out
( quote great just great)unquote

I was dr.jay

my two sites are http://www.freewebs.com/chimpythelonestar/
and join http://s7.invisionfree.com/Nintendo_Online

Me and Pink-Tiger together.


Phantom of Death is my Brother

Midori Chi my sis-in-law
So is fallen angel

join http://s7.invisionfree.com/Nintendo_Online
Age 31
Male
Santa Isabel, Mexico
Seen July 7th, 2018
Posted February 2nd, 2016
4,000 posts
18.9 Years
Try being original, zerro. No one will like your poetry if you just steal other song's lines.

To be honest, many rhymes you use are just... Awful. The rhythm is completely lost, and there are some grammar mistakes.

I know you can do better than simple hip-hop-song lyrics like those. I hope to see you improve. ~ =D
虎穴に入らずんば虎子を得ず
Age 29
Maryland
Seen January 14th, 2009
Posted January 27th, 2008
459 posts
18.1 Years
i'll keep dat in mind. and it's not really stealing
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http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_rathiosu_s.gif
http://www.serebiiforums.com/images...ario-sprite.png
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_rathiasu.gif
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_kaiooga.gif
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_guraadon.gif
http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_rekkuuza.gif thanks Hristo Karamanov[/IMG][IMG]http://soara.fc2web.com/img_icon/i_myuu.gif[
video games are great until lights go out
( quote great just great)unquote

I was dr.jay

my two sites are http://www.freewebs.com/chimpythelonestar/
and join http://s7.invisionfree.com/Nintendo_Online

Me and Pink-Tiger together.


Phantom of Death is my Brother

Midori Chi my sis-in-law
So is fallen angel

join http://s7.invisionfree.com/Nintendo_Online