Why Me Lord?

Started by White_Winter_Wolf September 29th, 2006 7:33 PM
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White_Winter_Wolf

Sasuke's Female Reincarnation!

Age 30
The bush with feet following Sasuke
Seen December 22nd, 2006
Posted September 29th, 2006
647 posts
18.2 Years
Why me lord
What did I do
I made sure that
I always followed you

If I were to sin
I begged you for forgivness
Why hand me a curse
And not eternal bless

You promised me immortal life
Yet you rob me of mine
And Peter's 'heaven entries' book
I soon will one day sign

Lord I thought you loved
I forever listened to you
The distrust that I am feeling
I only wish you knew

But the bible says you do know
You feel everything that I do
And now I understand lord
You want me up next to you


Sometime you need to
break the rules
and stand apart
ignore your .h.e.a.d.
and follow your .h.e.a.r.t.

What doesn't kill you
only makes you .s.t.r.o.n.g.e.r.
so when you think your hurtin' me
your just helpin' me last .l.o.n.g.e.r.

Hold on to who you love
stay true to what you know
take everything you dream of
and .n.e.v.e.r. let it go

Lily

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New Joisey
Seen February 26th, 2017
Posted June 26th, 2011
3,329 posts
18.7 Years
This is really quite touching... =D I love your poem's message.

Minor faults: typos, awkward rhythm, lack of punctuation, i.e. commas and such.

Disregarding those, I liked it! It felt sincere and genuine, and quite encouraging for one such as myself to read.

But the bible says you do know
You feel everything that I do
And now I understand lord
You want me up next to you
Particularly that stanza. I feel you did an overall okay job on it. Wonderful message. ^__^

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Jesus Freak Josh

In my mind's eye, I see You...

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Seen May 26th, 2022
Posted October 13th, 2009
2,968 posts
19.1 Years
w00t - Go Christians! It was a pretty good poem, though I do get a bit nitpicky when people forget to captialise things like 'Lord' and 'Bible'. But yeah, good job.
You're here for a reason you're not a mistake
You are a special creation that God himself made

- KJ-52

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