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Black Hole Sun

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  • Black Hole Sun

    Had been ages, few had wondered
    If the sun was now so old
    Satellites were counting hundred;
    The fat star was growing cold.

    The truth was known, and either way
    Silence struck, and meteors fled
    The wasted star was not to stay,
    And moody nights then stood ahead.

    Would so night be the epitaph,
    Of a moth-eaten black hole sun
    Left me stunned, and with a laugh
    Nothing more shall I become.

    But deep beneath the third blue rock,
    Wide and long, the feelings curved
    Where once time was caught in clock,
    From where we were once observed

    The words had spread, from faraway:
    In space the aged would nothing say?
    And so the little listened close;
    Their strongest light would fade away.

    And night would be the epitaph
    Of a moth-eaten black hole sun
    Left me stunned and with a laugh,
    Nothing more shall I become.

    The sky was pale, the sea in blues
    A sun was ready to explode.
    But she ran, she heard the news;
    Soon that light would blind no road.
    Willowing the metal breeze,
    Clouded faces in the street
    Soon the leaves and petals freeze
    And warmth becomes an empty sheet.

    It was too late, the time before
    And our friend did leave the sky.
    Ultraviolet no more,
    Not a glare, a distant cry.

    And will gloom carve my epitaph
    Like a moth-eaten, black hole sun
    I leave you shallow, not a laugh
    Nothing more shall we become.

    In the end, a long goodbye,
    By mellow voices and guitars
    If you lose the sun, and then you cry
    Your teary eyes won't find the stars.
     
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  • NIce descriptions and very straightforward, especially with transitions. Metaphors and they bring a drive to the visuals of an apocalyptic world. Nice job, as always!
     
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