Okay, lets start with the good things.
Not many, atleast it isn't a generic pokemon comic.
Bad things:
mix of styles, 3-d BG I belive, an FF style (I think) some other styles, thats alot, keep the styles the same, please, its not that humorous anyway, but this is only a preview.
EDIT: I've read a couple of the others, and I dislike them.
You've broken the fourth wall in the first comic