Mortal : Rise Of Elbargan

Started by Toadsworth October 23rd, 2006 11:06 PM
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Toadsworth

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Seen March 2nd, 2008
Posted January 16th, 2007
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Thanks to Arbok for the Banner


Game Name : Mortal Rise Of Elbargan

Made With : RPG Maker XP

Introduction:


I'm making a non pokemon game. It's fully english and it's under active development. There's a site for it : www.Mortal.6x.to ... It's a game of the series Mortal. My friend makes another version of Mortal. Mortal : Battle Of The Elves.

Story

Arshes is a fourteen-year-old boy when the world meets Elbargan, a dark wizard who wants to rule the world. Arshes wakes up I a muddy swamp and hears a voice out of nothing… Cole, one of his friends sees him and takes him to the tent where his other friends are. In the tent, Cole comes with the news that the King is searching someone who wants to help him. When they enter the castle, the monsters come and they defeat them. Then, the king tells the real story and asks the team of Arshes(Arshes,Cole,Hilda, Scef) to defeat Elbargan. He says that the Royal Mage, Lantion can teleport them to the cities which are invaded by Elbargan. There, you adventure starts... But all things are not what you think of them...

Features

There are more coming, but I'm not very good in telling the features.

- More then 100 monsters!
- More then 100 skill attacks!
- Enormous lands with great graphics!
- You will get other characters to play with further in the game!
- Minigames!
- Simple Controls!
- 99 levels and various stats!

Demos

Demo is on the site.

Screenshots

More coming.

Arshes In A City
Arshes standing next to a mage
Arshes in Mayor Kingston, the biggest city in the land
Arshes In A Snow City.

Progress

Mapping 50 %
Story 50 %
Characters 50 %
Monsters 60 %
Full Game 45 %

Comments please.



Webmaster of Pokestory.

New layout, more than 110 episodes about a pokemon story, what more?
Try not to be so symetrical with mapping, make some odd features and make things random, i do agree that your maps need work, they are not the worst i have seen however.

The story line sounds good, maybe if you could be willing to explain in a little more detail. Where did this "Elbargan" come from? Is he human?

Maybe some screenshots with some NPC's or a battle system or perhaps even just a screenshot with some dialogue!

Other than that, well done and keep up the work.

-Waudby-

Toadsworth

I'm bored..... Blerk...

Far Away
Seen March 2nd, 2008
Posted January 16th, 2007
277 posts
17.2 Years
Your mapping is very poor, there is way too much open space.
Try to add some different color grass, and some other things to give i more life.
Okay, I'll try.


The story line sounds good, maybe if you could be willing to explain in a little more detail. Where did this "Elbargan" come from? Is he human?
Well, that's something that's told in the very last part of the game(when you have to fight him).



Webmaster of Pokestory.

New layout, more than 110 episodes about a pokemon story, what more?

The Dash

Hurr.

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Seen June 12th, 2021
Posted July 29th, 2018
1,858 posts
17.7 Years
This is your first RMXP game is it not?
Your mapping is extremely bland and uniteresting, try not making things so symetrical and adding more features to pretty up the place. Try and get away from the RTP graphics as they are overused. I also see that you are using the default names for the characters aswell, you should change them.
That's all I have to say really, keep trying.

Edit: Damnit! Take that link to RMXP : Postality Knights off your site! I cannot support a game that uses an illigal version of RMXP.