Tormented Psychic

Started by Espy Psyche November 22nd, 2006 9:51 AM
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Espy Psyche

General of Pokemon Defender

Age 34
Pittsburgh, PA
Seen August 13th, 2009
Posted August 8th, 2008
574 posts
18 Years
I see them, they are all around me
The souls, the souls that haunt my mind
I hear them, they speak to me
They tell me what I should not know
I am a psychic, tormented and confused
Tormented by what I see
Tormented by what I hear
I feel them, pressing against my conscious
Wearing me down, reducing my stability
The emotional stability that attaches me to this realm
Soon I will be gone, entirely deteriorated
By this Great Poison that torments my soul
My visions are a Poison, destroying me from inside
As I fade away, only my memory will remain
The things I have done, remaining everlasting like stone
Unchanged by the sands of time, unmoving and static
I am fading from this world even now, but do not cry for me
The Realm of Light is where I should be
And the path of darkness is the only way


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Ninetales1

Japan-flavoured Europhile

Age 35
In a country I currently despise
Seen August 27th, 2013
Posted August 27th, 2013
723 posts
19.6 Years
Very interesting concept. The last three lines are kind of confusing though. What exactly is this "realm of light"? And I don't think you really need the "do not cry for me" in the third-to-last line.

Other than that, I love the rest of the poem.



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