Apology {PG-13} {One-shot}

Started by Yami Rui December 12th, 2006 4:33 PM
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Inside Rui's bed or shower
Seen March 15th, 2007
Posted February 22nd, 2007
188 posts
16.6 Years
Okay tis my first fic here at Pokecommunity but trust me, you'll enjoy the fic. This idea for this one-shot just suddenly popped up in my head and I thought it would be a cool idea for a one-shot. So this is the result of that idea.

RATING: This one-shot has been rated PG-13/T for a bit of language violence and will contain many being killed. So if you can't handle that stuff then please don't read. If you can then read on.


APOLOGY
ONE-SHOT


They steared at each other, one feeling hatred while one felt guilt for the other. They both had emotions going through them, controling their every thought at this point, the actions they'd make where because of their emotions.

The one that felt hatred had his colony, his family, his life killed, destoryed by this monster and his pack of savages. These savages as he saw them had no emotion, no respect, no soul as they killed what only he had left in his world. Adding on to the hatred he felt was that they took all that him and his family had gathered, food and skin to keep warm. And yet he was here to apologize, “WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO!” He thought in his mind.

The other one, the one who thought of guilt saw the anger, the hatred, the urge to get revenge saw those thoughts in those red eyes with black pupils. He was disgusted in what he had ordered his allies to do with him. Killing innocent pokemon, mothers, babies, slashing them to death, biting them, spilling out their blood. He had just wanted some food for them, some skin to keep warm during the harshly cold night, they were so darn desperate he wouldn't imagine they would go this far. But they did, he just hoped he could do something about it, an apology seemed like the best idea that came to his mind.

The one who had suffered a incredible loss made his voice heard first.

“What possessed you to do this to me, to those who I loved with all my soul, who were so peaceful and innocent, WHAT POSSESSED YOU TO DO THIS YOU PSYCOATIC MONSTER!” He moved in closer to who felt guilt, a Absol. Who felt large amounts of fear as Houndoom moved in closer, he could see the fear on Absol's gray face, it didn't matter to him, he deserved to feel that fear.

“Please Houndoom, I was insanely desperate for food and shelter for me and my allies, I'm sorry for what we did. PLEASE FORGIVE ME!”

“SORRY SORRY SORRY FOR KILLING 26 INNOCENT POKEMON, DESTORYING THEIR LIVES, MINE! NOTHING CAN MAKE ME FORGIVE YOU NOW, ENJOY YOUR STAY IN HELL YOU PSYCHOPATH!”

Houndoom advanced on Absol, it raised it's mouth and bit into Absol's snow white skin. It deepened it's teeth farther into Absol's skin causing Absol to scream in total pain. It knew that there was nothing it could do, it was gonna die and he knew he deserved it.

“THIS IS FOR MY LIFE!” Houndoom deepened it's teeth, crunching some of Absol's bones.

“THIS IS FOR MY HOME!” Houndoom added on the pain by shooting red-hot embers in Absol's body causing Absol to yell like it never yelled before.

“THIS IS FOR MY FAMILY!” Houndoom prepared to do the finishing blow but he saw that it was already done. Absol appeared motionless, it's heart appeared to have stopped. Houndoom took a step backward, realizing that whatever he did, his family would never return. But it felt like he did is own style of justice for this unimaginable crime.

“Apologizes....I serve no pity for him whatsoever.

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Whoa never imagined I'd do anything this dark in a long time. But still I enjoyed doing it, and I hoped you liked it and will reply with your opinions. I always like replies to a fanfic I write.

Yami Rui- Fic number 1 complete.
Bishies
Pokemon: Rui
Kim Possible: Kim Possible, Yori

Parings
Pokemon: MichaelxMarcia
Kim Possible: KimxShego, RonxYori
Age 30
United States of America
Seen September 6th, 2007
Posted September 6th, 2007
75 posts
16.9 Years
Ah, pretty good. I enjoyed it. The fanfics I write I wouldn't dare to put on here (ratings from PG-13 to, *Clears throat in embarrassment, tries to maintain dignity* X). I'd say that this gives more of a dark outlook on Pokemon, yet pretty much brings up the harsh realities of life. People can hate you, and they'll want to kill you even. Anyway, good story.
No, come back to the light side, we have chocolate fudge.:D
Inside Rui's bed or shower
Seen March 15th, 2007
Posted February 22nd, 2007
188 posts
16.6 Years
Ah, pretty good. I enjoyed it. The fanfics I write I wouldn't dare to put on here (ratings from PG-13 to, *Clears throat in embarrassment, tries to maintain dignity* X). I'd say that this gives more of a dark outlook on Pokemon, yet pretty much brings up the harsh realities of life. People can hate you, and they'll want to kill you even. Anyway, good story.
Yeah I wan't more fics out there with some looking at the dark realities of life. Yeah it's reality what I wrote and I'm glad you liked it.
Bishies
Pokemon: Rui
Kim Possible: Kim Possible, Yori

Parings
Pokemon: MichaelxMarcia
Kim Possible: KimxShego, RonxYori