<33 dear goodness. It finally loaded right.
Kagome:
Okay, I know you told me to give you harsh Critisism, but, O-o I can't be harsh to that! D= They're freaking wonderful~ Can't find a single flaw! Except the coloring could be smoother, but I'm not touching the coloring.
The proportions and positioning are wonderful o.o
xD her eyes are my favorite~ they look lively and curious.
I'm going to comment on the clothes, because as far as clothing goes, I think you make it fit really well with your pictures. You also draw clothing really nice and dare I say, skanky. I just adore how it all looks so natural~ Heh, the bra actually doesn't look bad at all, as there really are bras like that, at least here there are.
I like the darkest one too~ It's really shows the shadows nicely. Gorgeous work, A-kun~ Especially for using your references so well! 8D
Kanna piccy~
It's cute! her head looks a bit lopsided to me though, and hands are at awkward positions. It's better than my character line drawings though 0-0 I only paint with right proportions.
I love her foot, and the ankle arch.
Once more the clothing stands out, I love how it fits~ the fold lines and all are great. I don't know if that makes sense. xD
Her hair is beautiful~ flower, ftw!
Portrait:
the portrait drawing is gorgeous. You're nice at figures~
I love the hair, and the lines on the neck to the lips are so precise~
<3 hehe~ I really like it! nothing to critisize~ nice angling too.
Post more for sure~ Your art is truely beautiful!
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