Enoshima: A New Manga

Started by Kitty17794 April 25th, 2004 11:44 AM
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Kitty17794

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Not pokemon, but I didnt think you all would mind....

Me and my friend's manga. We're planning on having it published this Christmas, so check it out if you want :D

http://www.geocities.com/enterenoshima

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aRedMoon

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Nice looking... but do everyone a favor and get off Geocities.

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Kitty17794

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shouldnt this be in other manga?
dunno...since it's not OUT yet...I didnt know if it belonged there

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Ryoutarou

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Ya....it's not all that great...if you are going to want to compete with other american mangaka like me and larty legrow you are going to have to get a lot better...first of all dont ever draw on lined paper it just screws with the pic. Your cherecters are to flat and dont have dimesnion to them and sadly they look like they were just pasted on...a lot of people dont know this but shading is your friend.

Evil Togepi

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I think your manga is off to a good start ^^ As long as you keep it up and keep practising then it should look even better, you already have a talent for doing it more than me X_x; The amount of times I've tried to start my own manga and didn't get very far with it XD I don't have the patiance for doing comics, but yet i keep trying...
...I'm currently thinking on doing a fan manga crossing over many different anime characters X_x;

I really like the look of the character Ryu ^^ Kinda reminds me of a Kai/Bakura cross X3

Cherrim

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Blue, you don't have to be so critical of it. Be happy that people are exploring and practicing the manga technique. =\ Just saying "you dont know anything about preportions and shading" is completely useless. If you want to critique the artistical side of it, at least help with HOW improvements can be made. Anyone can just point things out, but it takes a real artists to be able to lend a helping hand, you know. :\

Er... anyway. I'm not sure if this is best suited for Mixed Art or Other Anime/Manga, I'm leaning toward Mixed Art, but I'll leave it here for now. Anyway... I like the premise for this. ^_^; It's too bad you've only got a few pages up, since I'd like to read more of it in manga-form.

I keep meaning to start my own manga, but even after 3 years, I can't seem to come up with a decent plot. ._.;;


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Cherrim

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What serial was the doujinshi for, blue? @[email protected] I'd be interested in seeing or hearing about it (and even more so if I've even heard of its basis, as I know you've seen a lot of anime I haven't). ^_^;


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Kitty17794

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Gee Blue...

The pics you are so critical of are SKETCHES. My pal Nicole is the artist, and she puts up sketches, then COLORS them. So the sketches arent the final things yanno....

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Evil Togepi

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Well I think if her dream is to create a manga I say go for it, dreams are there to be followed ^^

Besides don't mangas usually release about 19 pages or so a week...? Maybe I'm wrong but from reading the Naruto manga they only do 19 pages or so a chapter ^^; seems the same goes for most other mangas but my knowlage on manga is still not very good so I'll stand corrected if I'm wrong.

I say give her a break and let her follow her dream she'll learn by experience whether she could handle it or not ;)

Ryoutarou

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Well I think if her dream is to create a manga I say go for it, dreams are there to be followed ^^

Besides don't mangas usually release about 19 pages or so a week...? Maybe I'm wrong but from reading the Naruto manga they only do 19 pages or so a chapter ^^; seems the same goes for most other mangas but my knowlage on manga is still not very good so I'll stand corrected if I'm wrong.

I say give her a break and let her follow her dream she'll learn by experience whether she could handle it or not ;)
19 pages but you notice that it's double sided which will make about 40 or so pages a week. ever notice how your dreams starrt thisBIGBUT END UPthis big not gonna happen with people like us.

Kitty17794

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That's not true. I know we can do it. On my part, I'm a 14 year old published author. I know how dreams work. I know I can do it, with or without your support.

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