^ And that's where my bet would go.
NewMew, see, this is an area for stories to be posted and rated. All you've done is come on here, made a very egotistical post about how "great" your story is and how you won't make it because "it'd be too good." When I bet the reason you won't make it is because you can't. Plus, you've shown absolutely no proof that this story will be amazing. But, judging by your grammar skills, I'm going to guess that it's really not as great as you think it is. Anyway..
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