Ok! maby you lot are right and maybe i should just give you a little taster of whats yet to come how about that?
pokemon gold will be it's home, it lives at the top of the the New Burnt Tower in a brand new land not region? and you the hero have been asigned a mission to destory this thing? but it wont be easy becos a team of Yu-gi-oh madmen have change their cards in to a new breed of pokemon called poke-oh. your mission is to exterminate all of thess madmen and get to new burnt tower to meet the creator of this new breed "A huge plot twist"
That was the taster lol i have already started on the creation but, i am not allowd to release anything until i have tested the Beta version for bugs lol. i am sorry for being a jerk ealer it wont happen again! :)
if someone could help me impove on this plot i would welcome the advice
Could someone Please do me a favor and close this thread? i dont think this idea is going to take off! It is a stupid plot and i should get out more! Thanx Azura for pointing this out. And i am dyslexic so my grammar and punctuation are going to be bad for the rest of my life. Thank Man.
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Azura is right, the way you were hyping the story up made it seem like it was supposed to be some incredible, original story that would blow us away. This was more like a fart in the wind.
For being dyslexic, your spelling is great. It seems more like poor grammar skills to me, so I really hope you aren't using dyslexia as an excuse.