Pokemon Topaz

Started by Death Rogers February 24th, 2007 6:21 AM
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Death Rogers

Great Old One

Age 29
Male
New York
Seen August 29th, 2016
Posted July 6th, 2013
366 posts
17.4 Years
No, it's not a hack or new game, it's a comic series. By me! It's basically a bunch of shorts where a protagonist faces an issue which eventually gets him killed. There's no real plot.

WARNING: These comics involve swearing and violence. I do not recommend you to read them if you are under the age of 13.
NOT-SO-SERIOUS-WARNING: If you are overweight, you may find "It's the Diner's Fault I'm Fat" to be somewhat offensive as it involves overweight characters having heart attacks.

"It's the Diner's Fault I'm Fat."
#1 So Hungry
#2 SECURITY!
#3 Nonsense

"Why do you even want it?"

"G-G-ghost!!"
#1 This isn't funny!
#2 But why?

The Fall of Giovanni (Don't be fooled by the title, this comic miniseries is anything but serious.)
#1 The Jig Is Up!
Age 29
England.
Seen January 5th, 2008
Posted August 8th, 2007
4,419 posts
18.7 Years
Your aiming for a humourous comic, yes? Well I suggest getting better material, because somebody having a heart attack isn't that funny, neither is the diaglouge.

Work on the humour and you might find yourself with a better comic.

Its not bad, but the humour is, just work on the humour, and use speech bubbles
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Fish Spaghetti Town
Seen May 18th, 2016
Posted September 17th, 2015
3,543 posts
17.7 Years
I can't really see that offence much, I meen, I won't lie, I'm a little overweight and I even created a chaiter called "Fat may" and she weighed...*thinks* 400 something pounds. So, if some people think its offensive, you should put in the warning bar -may be offence to some-
Collection DeviantART Pokemon

super epic credit to Cilerba and Calis for OW Bases,
make sure you check them out as well!

Death Rogers

Great Old One

Age 29
Male
New York
Seen August 29th, 2016
Posted July 6th, 2013
366 posts
17.4 Years
Yeah, I tried not to offend too much with the second one.

I didn't know what to do with the first. So I made a comic about what came to mind first, which was heart attacks. But really, the heart attack wasn't the main joke in comic 1-3. The main joke I had in there was when the fat guy said "Nonsense, those are for fat people."

Signomi

Age 32
Female
Britland (United Kingdom)
Seen 1 Week Ago
Posted October 10th, 2022
7,480 posts
17.8 Years
Once again, don't advertise in another person's comic thread. Another post like that and it's a warning. :/

Basically, all posts must refer completely to the comic. I see you're new around here, so keep that in mind.

Dance, Carmen! ☆★

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Captain Arcane

spoon full o'peanut butter

Age 31
Male
United States
Seen June 20th, 2022
Posted September 25th, 2009
788 posts
16.9 Years
I like them! ^_^ But they seem a little empty at times, like, try having a little more pictures. But overall, I think they were pretty good, but you can do way better I bet!

Keep it up! ^_'