First Comic

Started by SuperDeoxys March 5th, 2007 3:28 AM
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Age 36
At the back of you! *Ahh!*
Seen January 20th, 2010
Posted January 22nd, 2008
116 posts
16.3 Years
My first comic if you cant see words then put it on paint i'll talkl more later right now i'm busy:
first episode


------Recent Shinies

Mareep
Lv 30
Wild in FR and LG
Calm nature
Fire Red
Up for trade


Break this code to win a Pokemon:
Oyu ear os onwrdeulfl ot em. esealp skis em. snkhta.

[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
Err. Good enough, I guess.
First, don't use photobucket, it resizes your images.
Don't mix bittages, for FR/LG sprites use FR/LG backgrounds, and not D/P backgrounds. Also, give credit to where you found your sprites, I doubt you created them.
People can't join comics, it's against the rules here.
Don't overuse swearing, noone in real life uses sh** in every sentence. As well as read the PC rules, you can't swear period.
Finally, get better jokes, there's nothing too funny in there.

Gaah.
This signature is under construction.
But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
-[NP]
Age 32
Male
Seen May 16th, 2011
Posted October 28th, 2010
5,058 posts
18.4 Years
My friend, you've already thrown yourself in deep with no life jacket. Lines like "if u gt nuffin nice 2 say den SHUT UP" only encourage flamers and hard Critters to come down on you like a locust swarm. The Grammar / Spelling is sadly quite bad, and the whole appearance of the comic needs work. You should really be using speech bubbles, and don;t use such eye burning colours.
Age 36
At the back of you! *Ahh!*
Seen January 20th, 2010
Posted January 22nd, 2008
116 posts
16.3 Years
Ok sorry it's my first........I'll get better.....
Edit:And if u have nothing nice to say then dont post.........And i was in a rush that time!


------Recent Shinies

Mareep
Lv 30
Wild in FR and LG
Calm nature
Fire Red
Up for trade


Break this code to win a Pokemon:
Oyu ear os onwrdeulfl ot em. esealp skis em. snkhta.

[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
And when I said you can't swear, I mean not in the thread. My bad.
But use swearing sparingly, it's somewhat frowned upon.
Sorry for being too harsh.

Gaah.
This signature is under construction.
But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
-[NP]

Chizzy

Comic coming soon...

Age 31
UK
Seen October 27th, 2010
Posted June 22nd, 2010
1,475 posts
17.6 Years
Ok sorry it's my first........I'll get better.....
Edit: And if u have nothing nice to say then dont post.........And i was in a rush that time!
I don't really understand what you mean by that...
Now you could remember me...

Then Again...

...its been a while
Age 36
At the back of you! *Ahh!*
Seen January 20th, 2010
Posted January 22nd, 2008
116 posts
16.3 Years
I made the sprite! it took awhile and and paul's sprite i made!

Immade the sprite it took awhile!


------Recent Shinies

Mareep
Lv 30
Wild in FR and LG
Calm nature
Fire Red
Up for trade


Break this code to win a Pokemon:
Oyu ear os onwrdeulfl ot em. esealp skis em. snkhta.

Pazuzu

Flushing Meadows

Room 1202
Seen October 30th, 2010
Posted March 29th, 2010
5,448 posts
18.7 Years
SuperDeoxys, do not double post. If you have to add something you forgot to mention in your previous posts, please use the Edit button, located in the bottom right corner of you post.
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Chizzy

Comic coming soon...

Age 31
UK
Seen October 27th, 2010
Posted June 22nd, 2010
1,475 posts
17.6 Years
Its okbut the ash sprite looks messed up just use a diamond and pearl sprite or something.
Its because it is an edited sprite, and its in FRLG style, wheras the other sprite is in RSE.

And heh, you go and find an Ash DP sprite - Very hard Indeed.
Now you could remember me...

Then Again...

...its been a while

[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
Its because it is an edited sprite, and its in FRLG style, wheras the other sprite is in RSE.

And heh, you go and find an Ash DP sprite - Very hard Indeed.
The best thing to do is make one, although that's not the easiest thing in the world.
Or you can just use FR/LG backgrounds. That would make it blend a bit more. Although not completely.

Gaah.
This signature is under construction.
But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
-[NP]
Male
Fish Spaghetti Town
Seen May 18th, 2016
Posted September 17th, 2015
3,543 posts
17.7 Years
ah...um...ah....o-kay...
about the smallest comic I've EVER seen. Hard to read text,
Bad humor (Swears used over and over does NOT make humor),
As said before, NEVER use photobucket- I use Imageshack
because they don't resize your image, and use text bubbles witch are easier
to read. And I suggest watching the TV channel "Comedy Central" they have loads of
material, that you could use. sorry, but I didn't find this comic funny...at all.
Collection DeviantART Pokemon

super epic credit to Cilerba and Calis for OW Bases,
make sure you check them out as well!

Death Rogers

Great Old One

Age 29
Male
New York
Seen August 29th, 2016
Posted July 6th, 2013
366 posts
17.4 Years
It wasn't that funny. But it was OK for a first. And 100 kilos is very unrealistic. I'm assuming Ash in your comic is 10-13 years old. That'd be about 200 pounds. And if you still want him to be hideously overweight, at least make his sprite different.
Age 32
Male
Seen May 16th, 2011
Posted October 28th, 2010
5,058 posts
18.4 Years
ah...um...ah....o-kay...
about the smallest comic I've EVER seen. Hard to read text,
Bad humor (Swears used over and over does NOT make humor),
As said before, NEVER use photobucket- I use Imageshack
because they don't resize your image, and use text bubbles witch are easier
to read. And I suggest watching the TV channel "Comedy Central" they have loads of
material, that you could use. sorry, but I didn't find this comic funny...at all.
I've always used photobucket, and my comics have never lost any quality, whereas Imageshack is plagued with pop ups and lengthly waits.
Male
Fish Spaghetti Town
Seen May 18th, 2016
Posted September 17th, 2015
3,543 posts
17.7 Years
I've always used photobucket, and my comics have never lost any quality, whereas Imageshack is plagued with pop ups and lengthly waits.
yeah, but when I used photobucket when I tried to make my first comic, BUT it was so small, and who cares about popups and a little longer waits? doesn't it matter who well they do it? it works. trust me, my VGcats avatars where always destroied by photobucket- just give me a second and I'll show you some examples.
Collection DeviantART Pokemon

super epic credit to Cilerba and Calis for OW Bases,
make sure you check them out as well!
Age 30
Ontario, Canada
Seen November 19th, 2012
Posted November 30th, 2011
4,612 posts
17.4 Years
The text isn't as difficult to read as a few of you assume. Not bad for your first try, but don't be offended by what others tell you, they're only offering you some positive criticism to assist you on improving your comic. Suppose that it's 'something good' to say.

Arumus

Insert user title here..

Age 31
Male
United Kingdom
Seen September 11th, 2013
Posted September 23rd, 2012
520 posts
16.2 Years
People can't join comics, it's against the rules here.
Don't overuse swearing, noone in real life uses sh** in every sentence. As well as read the PC rules, you can't swear period.
Finally, get better jokes, there's nothing too funny in there.
I tottally agree there, I thought it had a pointless storyline aswell. But on a positive note, I did enjoy the sprite of Ash.