The Funny Comic of mine V.2

Started by SuperDeoxys March 9th, 2007 3:45 PM
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[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
One you need better jokes. Much better jokes.
And get better backgrounds, the eye blinding paint default colors are.. blinding my eyes.
You definantly need better grammar. Spell check on word :)
Speech bubbles would be nice.

Gaah.
This signature is under construction.
But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
-[NP]

Death Rogers

Great Old One

Age 29
Male
New York
Seen August 29th, 2016
Posted July 6th, 2013
366 posts
17.4 Years
A few words of advice:

1 In-battle sprites are pretty much the worst kind of sprites for a comic. You should use overworld sprites, except for when there's a battle.

2 Don't use default paint colors for backgrounds.

3 Use speech bubbles. Using just a line and words makes it hard to tell who's saying it.

4 (This is going to sound harsh, but I'm only trying to help.) Get better jokes. The ones you're using now aren't even remotely funny.
Male
Fish Spaghetti Town
Seen May 18th, 2016
Posted September 17th, 2015
3,543 posts
17.7 Years
it's okay. I've seen worse. I didn't laugh, and The story could use some sence,
and it could use better backrounds and jokes. But, atleast you set up a chairter
basis. use overworlds and smaller -like poke'mon games- backround for them
to walk on.
Collection DeviantART Pokemon

super epic credit to Cilerba and Calis for OW Bases,
make sure you check them out as well!