Map Rating/Review Thread Page 138

Started by Christos April 1st, 2007 9:39 AM
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Alice

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Age 31
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Oregon
Seen April 30th, 2015
Posted April 29th, 2015
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The thing about those caves is that they had a lot of human activity. They go in there and clean out boulders and the such for you to go around in. I've been spelunking myself. Great time.
So they dug into the ceiling until it was over 100ft high? I don't think so. These caves have been preserved as much as possible afaik. They even cut off part of the caves due to human damage.
Age 31
Female
BC, Canada
Seen February 1st, 2012
Posted May 24th, 2011
484 posts
14.5 Years
Thanks for your comments, guys! I wasn't expecting it. xD Yes, there are border problems. It didn't really occur to me. I expanded the edges to take care of it. Does the entrance looks funny because the glow is yellow/brown instead of blue? I touched it up. The sand around the bottom of the cliffs is gone.

It is a rather 'easy' level, but there is a second level above it that I can fiddle with to thoroughly exhaust the player. I also added a boulder puzzle to the 'stairs down' area.

As for the size of the space...I guess you're right, it's pretty roomy. I've never been in a cave myself but, from what I've read of them, they tend to form vertically when water seeps through and dissolves the limestone. That's why the path goes up, and the way caves are mapped, it looks like the ceiling is very high all throughout the cave. That might not be so obvious when you play through it, though.

Edited map:

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Posted June 13th, 2020
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18.3 Years
Thanks for your comments, guys! I wasn't expecting it. xD Yes, there are border problems. It didn't really occur to me. I expanded the edges to take care of it. Does the entrance looks funny because the glow is yellow/brown instead of blue? I touched it up. The sand around the bottom of the cliffs is gone.

It is a rather 'easy' level, but there is a second level above it that I can fiddle with to thoroughly exhaust the player. I also added a boulder puzzle to the 'stairs down' area.

As for the size of the space...I guess you're right, it's pretty roomy. I've never been in a cave myself but, from what I've read of them, they tend to form vertically when water seeps through and dissolves the limestone. That's why the path goes up, and the way caves are mapped, it looks like the ceiling is very high all throughout the cave. That might not be so obvious when you play through it, though.

Edited map:
Wow, this is quite possibly one of the best maps I've seen here! The concept is awesome and the mapping looks pretty official. I really like the detail put into it and the boulder puzzle is a nice touch too! I saw 2 tile errors on near the top of the map, though. Other than that, it's flawless. Keep up the excellent work!

10/10

Alice

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Seen April 30th, 2015
Posted April 29th, 2015
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Wow, this is quite possibly one of the best maps I've seen here! The concept is awesome and the mapping looks pretty official. I really like the detail put into it and the boulder puzzle is a nice touch too! I saw 2 tile errors on near the top of the map, though. Other than that, it's flawless. Keep up the excellent work!

10/10
Yes, I see them too. There's two spots there the corner tile is repeated when it should just be a wall.
Germany
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Posted February 24th, 2014
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14.1 Years
I made a map (-_- again xD) i'm working on a hack so i try to use some of tiles----- I'm too stupid to choose which tiles I'm gonna using -_- however here's the map its a little tiny route:

Map Name: Little tiny route
Map Game: FireRed
Comments: I love the tiles of the grass :-*
Credits: Alistair, Wesley FG, WAH

Spoiler:
I think i was missed out again :'(

Mana

Age 31
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UK
Seen March 25th, 2023
Posted August 18th, 2021
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14.3 Years
Master of Puppets:

8/10 A lovely map but its tiny! :)

I don't really have any suggestions, except perhaps extend it up a bit :) I love the tiles too!
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California
Seen May 19th, 2022
Posted February 18th, 2013
493 posts
14.9 Years
Map Name: Solo village

Map Game: Fire red

Comments: This is a map for my hack. Its my redone map. No blue flowers and still the pokemon center is messed up in one tile or two
I was left out. T-T. {Please grade and put constructive critism
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Posted February 13th, 2011
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Big tile error with the pokemon center also you need more houses and vegatation just odn't put it in random places. I'd give it a 5/10

EDIT: Also your town is too square mix it up a little new record: 3/10
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California
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Posted February 18th, 2013
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Big tile error with the pokemon center also you need more houses and vegatation just odn't put it in random places. I'd give it a 5/10
I know about the tile error i cant fix that sadly. And its just a small rest town where you go through rite before you go into a realy long cave. And il make sure i dont put vegitatioh in random places., Thnx you
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Logan

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Seen July 19th, 2022
Posted November 12th, 2021
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I was left out. T-T. {Please grade and put constructive critism
4/10
Hmm...
I don't like it. The placement of things really isn't that good. And some of the stuffs in it are mucked up especially the Poké Center.

Thanks for your comments, guys! I wasn't expecting it. xD Yes, there are border problems. It didn't really occur to me. I expanded the edges to take care of it. Does the entrance looks funny because the glow is yellow/brown instead of blue? I touched it up. The sand around the bottom of the cliffs is gone.

It is a rather 'easy' level, but there is a second level above it that I can fiddle with to thoroughly exhaust the player. I also added a boulder puzzle to the 'stairs down' area.

As for the size of the space...I guess you're right, it's pretty roomy. I've never been in a cave myself but, from what I've read of them, they tend to form vertically when water seeps through and dissolves the limestone. That's why the path goes up, and the way caves are mapped, it looks like the ceiling is very high all throughout the cave. That might not be so obvious when you play through it, though.

Edited map:
8/10
I really like bar a few tile errors it's really good.

Map Name:Tauprey Town

Map Game:Pokemon Fire Red

Comments:I worh hard on this maps..it takes me quite a long time to do this as im not expert on this.and im quite proud of it.
Spoiler:
4/10
Well a few things bug me with this map. Why are the doors of some houses randomly different? And what bugs me the most is why is there aload of bikes in the middle of the map. I understand a couple if there is a bike shop but 18 is a bit too many xD

Alice

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Posted April 29th, 2015
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I think i was missed out again :'(
I actually really like the look of this a lot. It gives the feel of being in the middle of a dense forest, and finding this clearing with a small pond. It's really cool.

Unfortunately the grass doesn't seem to look very good when right next to a flower or tall grass. You can see a line where it suddenly changes color and everything. I'll still give you an 9/10 though.
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try 2.5
the description is near the top of the page---
Hopewell
Fire Red
Insults Help Me, So Get Ur Fill
Rating: 5/10.

Reason: The pallettes could be toned down a little bit. The map is too square, the Gym too big width ways. Visible Tile Errors in the trees (Look far Left and Far Right Bottom Corners!) The mountain and pond aren't natural looking and are too square. In gact, the whol map is too square. You have potential talent, but it isn't there yet. The building in the Top Right corner has Tile Errors (check the windows...)


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Posted May 18th, 2009
104 posts
14.1 Years
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The pallets are Hurting my eyes. @[email protected]
It is square-like.
rating: 3/10

comments: ____look mapping tutorials.
Thank you for the honesty, i will change the squareness but..... how do i change the pallet? Cuz I Hate It To...... Should I Just Remake It (fixing bugs) With Another Rom Base?

Here Is Try Three
Hopewell Valley
Fire Red
Insults= Helpful
same stuff
I Did 2 To Ask Which Pallets Do You All Like? That Would Help Me

Alice

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Oregon
Seen April 30th, 2015
Posted April 29th, 2015
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14.2 Years
Here Is Try Three
Hopewell Valley
Fire Red
Insults= Helpful
same stuff
I Did 2 To Ask Which Pallets Do You All Like? That Would Help Me
The second one is much better palette-wise. Keep working on the actual map though.

Ray Maverick

Age 27
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Posted 2 Days Ago
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14.3 Years
Thank you for the honesty, i will change the squareness but..... how do i change the pallet? Cuz I Hate It To...... Should I Just Remake It (fixing bugs) With Another Rom Base?
Sorry,but i don't know nothing about pallets. X.x

for your second map.
Better tiles,but you've left free space.
rating: 4/10

comment/suggestion: Don't leave too much free space,and there is an un-normal mistake in the cave.

Haz

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Female
Australia- Aussie, Aussie, Aussie!, Oi, Oi, Oi!
Seen August 16th, 2011
Posted October 21st, 2010
698 posts
14.5 Years
Ok, here's my map

Name: Boldur Shrine
Location: Outskirts of Boldur City (replaced Pewter City)
Comments: This is the shrine of a deceased Golem which was Marty's, the Gym Leader of Boldur City. The evil team, Team Chaos kidnapped it as a Graveler and made it evolve.
Marty got it back fortunatly, however in a battle when team Chaos tried to kidnap it again, it accidently called a Rock slide and neatly killed Marty. It sacrificed itself to save his trainer and the Chaos grunts were arrested. Marty never forgot this act or his faitful Pokemon so he made a shrine for it.

Spoiler:
I got skipped again :(
Please rate.
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Age 27
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Posted May 18th, 2009
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Sorry,but i don't know nothing about pallets. X.x

for your second map.
Better tiles,but you've left free space.
rating: 4/10

comment/suggestion: Don't leave too much free space,and there is an un-normal mistake in the cave.
What Mistake? And Also, How Would You Suggest Filling The Free Space?

Logan

Age 28
Male
Salisbury, England
Seen July 19th, 2022
Posted November 12th, 2021
10,414 posts
14.5 Years
MY map is skipped again...lol...
i have edit abit from this map which i post not long ago...
Name:Tauprey Town
Fire red
comment...i edit the doors and the bikes...
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5/10
All you did was change the doors and change it from 18 to 11 which is still ridiculous.

Ray Maverick

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Posted 2 Days Ago
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14.3 Years
What Mistake? And Also, How Would You Suggest Filling The Free Space?
Trees my friend.Fill the empty space with trees,bushes,and grass,check my maps to see how i do that.
And search the mistake in the entrance of the cave.

MY map is skipped again...lol...
i have edit abit from this map which i post not long ago...
Name:Tauprey Town
Fire red
comment...i edit the doors and the bikes...
Spoiler:


map: I see you fixed some mistakes.You placed the rocks more natural,and i see you're learning very fast.
rating: 5/10

comments= fill the empty space,and make the road to reach every
house.



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5/10
All you did was change the doors and change it from 18 to 11 which is still ridiculous.
Come on,its not ridiculus,Think what ageangel would think if he sees that.


Here are some of my maps.I made all of them in 1 hour.
Credits: The tiles of Never
Thanks to the masterofpuppets for the mapshots
Its Ruby the rombase.
These maps are for a certain series of pokemon.They are not series of hacks,they are series of Videos,Anti Virus.

This is a simple map,i made it for fun,don't tell me that it don't have a way out,i know it.i made it in 10 min.
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The second map is a simple route.I made it in 17 minutes.
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The third map is a clearing in the relic forest.There are some relics,as you can see.

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The last map is a lake.It took me 2 hours to make.

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Thats all for now,i hope you like them.
Male
PokeTopia
Seen November 24th, 2012
Posted July 30th, 2011
124 posts
14.2 Years
These maps are great,Ray!!!So,i'm gonna rate them. ^^

The first map is a simple,nice clearing in the forest.Good,i like it.
rating: 6,89/10

the second map is a good looking route.
rating: 7,52/10

the third map is the relics.Not my taste,but good.
rating: 7,13/10

the last map is this amazing lake.Awesome!!
rating: 9,39/10

suggestions: none,i see no mapping mistakes. ;)