Map Rating/Review Thread Page 139

Started by Christos April 1st, 2007 9:39 AM
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Master Terrador

Mostly Dead

Age 29
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Somewhere
Seen January 17th, 2017
Posted January 1st, 2017
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14.4 Years
@Ray~About time I see some of your maps...

First One~Urm...How do you get in and out...I can't see a clear way...
Rating~7/10
Suggestions~Make a clear Entrance...

Second~Hm...Too straight forward...I see nothing in your way that makes you wind off the Dirt road...
Rating~5/10
Suggestions~Its too straight forward...Try putting in obstacles...Its also a little plain...

Third...~Too Straight forward...And not too many Relics...Although I like the Dead trees...
Rating~7/10
Suggestions~Put more relics in...Its suppose to be in a Relic clearing...Yet all I see is one...

Finally Fourth~...This one is real good...And It does look like you put alot of time into it...(2 hours)...
Rating~9.5/10
Suggestions~None...:)

@Paul~

Map Name: Windchime Village~Okay...I have some Issues...Like the house behind the Pokemon Center has half a window...I also find It Strange that The Pokecenter and Mart Have House doors...And the fenced in house...If your look at the grass near the House below it...There are two tile errors...
Rating~7/10
Suggestions~Fix the errors I pointed out...If you want to leave the Center and Mart with those doors...Thats fine...:)

Haz

Haz ya seen my hack?

Female
Australia- Aussie, Aussie, Aussie!, Oi, Oi, Oi!
Seen August 16th, 2011
Posted October 21st, 2010
698 posts
14.5 Years
Name: Boldur Shrine
Location: Outskirts of Boldur City (replaced Pewter City)
Comments: This is the shrine of a deceased Golem which was Marty's, the Gym Leader of Boldur City. The evil team, Team Chaos kidnapped it as a Graveler and made it evolve.
Marty got it back fortunatly, however in a battle when team Chaos tried to kidnap it again, it accidently called a Rock slide and neatly killed Marty. It sacrificed itself to save his trainer and the Chaos grunts were arrested. Marty never forgot this act or his faitful Pokemon so he made a shrine for it.

Spoiler:

I hate to be a nag but this is the second time I got skipped for this map:\. I really want it rated as it's for my hack. Please rate.
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Age 27
Seen May 19th, 2009
Posted May 18th, 2009
104 posts
14.1 Years
I hate to be a nag but this is the second time I got skipped for this map:\. I really want it rated as it's for my hack. Please rate.
i'm stupid with maps and probobly don't know what i'm saying, but i say 9/10..... (9 cuz those 2 trees sorta urk me)

Disturbed

Age 29
Seen October 21st, 2019
Posted August 29th, 2019
1,911 posts
15 Years
Well, due to request, and steady decline in map quality... here's a map I'm sure some of you will recognize, and hopefully steer some of you in a better direction.

I present to you my best map to date, and to ever surface this planet :D
Birolis



*scurries away*
Why would you care?
Seen July 2nd, 2011
Posted February 13th, 2011
184 posts
15.1 Years
Well, due to request, and steady decline in map quality... here's a map I'm sure some of you will recognize, and hopefully steer some of you in a better direction.

I present to you my best map to date, and to ever surface this planet :D
Birolis



*scurries away*
WOAH really great map I'd give it a 10/10
Sometimes...it's hell before you get to heaven...

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Help me raise my pokemon!

Cre....Creselia!!?!?!?!?!?!
Age 27
Seen May 19th, 2009
Posted May 18th, 2009
104 posts
14.1 Years
Well, due to request, and steady decline in map quality... here's a map I'm sure some of you will recognize, and hopefully steer some of you in a better direction.

I present to you my best map to date, and to ever surface this planet :D
Birolis



*scurries away*
100/10 OMGIGITY (no, not really)
i give it a 10 cuz it's awesome- how did you get the D/P Tiles?
Also, It Has Very Nice Structure And A Nice Layout- I'm Sure This Map Is Every Mappers Wet Dream

destinedjagold

You can contact me in PC's discord server...

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Seen 3 Days Ago
Posted March 24th, 2023
8,579 posts
16 Years
Well, due to request, and steady decline in map quality... here's a map I'm sure some of you will recognize, and hopefully steer some of you in a better direction.

I present to you my best map to date, and to ever surface this planet :D
Birolis
Spoiler:



*scurries away*
Your map is 640x640 in size, so wrap a SPOILER tag around it next time...
COMMENT: It's a very wonderful map, no doubt.
RATING: 9/10
SUGGESTION: Nothing, I guess...

Seen March 14th, 2015
Posted July 26th, 2009
175 posts
14.8 Years
here are my maps for pokemon kanto

Route 1r1.PNG
Route 3r3.PNG
Route 5r5.PNG
Route 22r22.PNG

here are the towns for pokemon kanto
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Posted August 13th, 2012
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here are the towns for pokemon kanto
That fourth map (the one with the coastline in the southwestern corner) looks remarkably similar to a map in the Legend of Fenju :\

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Alice

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Posted April 29th, 2015
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here are the towns for pokemon kanto
Route 1 and 3 and Vermillion are all good. The rest need work. (Although, even on route 3, the left end is pretty open and boring, maybe a little more grass here and there would make things nicer.)

A few problems that I saw consistantly through the maps. Large square areas a grass. Mix things up a bit. Look at some of the other maps here, and you'll see that they have open areas in the grass, among other things to make it all feel nicer. In the towns, the old buildings look weird with the new palette... The way they are placed feels awkward. Especially in map one, the path above the buildings (there are too many in that one area btw) doesn't seem right does it? I also noticed that the paths are too straight forward. This is a problem that is exceptionally difficult for me to fix in my maps for some reason... but I agree with everyone else, it does make things look better.
So, rethink your paths and house positions, and lighten up on the grass a little.
Some of your maps would be getting 9s but overall I'd say you're around 6-7ish level.

I can't believe I didn't notice it right away, but there are some major tile errors (actually more like tiles left out) in the edges of the water. The tips are missing... in fact I'm seeing errors in a lot of places.
(Are these all made by you? It really seems like more than one person of different skill levels doing these.)

Lover's Kite

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California
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Posted September 4th, 2014
734 posts
15.8 Years
Well, due to request, and steady decline in map quality... here's a map I'm sure some of you will recognize, and hopefully steer some of you in a better direction.

I present to you my best map to date, and to ever surface this planet :D
Birolis



*scurries away*
I really like this one, simple with a touch of complexity. I like how you added more "filling" tiles in the core of the map (especially the various placement of trees), really makes it look nice! Great job~

Score: 10 out of 10
Seen March 14th, 2015
Posted July 26th, 2009
175 posts
14.8 Years
That fourth map (the one with the coastline in the southwestern corner) looks remarkably similar to a map in the Legend of Fenju :\
how?

Route 1 and 3 and Vermillion are all good. The rest need work. (Although, even on route 3, the left end is pretty open and boring, maybe a little more grass here and there would make things nicer.)

A few problems that I saw consistantly through the maps. Large square areas a grass. Mix things up a bit. Look at some of the other maps here, and you'll see that they have open areas in the grass, among other things to make it all feel nicer. In the towns, the old buildings look weird with the new palette... The way they are placed feels awkward. Especially in map one, the path above the buildings (there are too many in that one area btw) doesn't seem right does it? I also noticed that the paths are too straight forward. This is a problem that is exceptionally difficult for me to fix in my maps for some reason... but I agree with everyone else, it does make things look better.
So, rethink your paths and house positions, and lighten up on the grass a little.
Some of your maps would be getting 9s but overall I'd say you're around 6-7ish level.

I can't believe I didn't notice it right away, but there are some major tile errors (actually more like tiles left out) in the edges of the water. The tips are missing... in fact I'm seeing errors in a lot of places.
(Are these all made by you? It really seems like more than one person of different skill levels doing these.)
thx!

Lol, he didn't make Vermillion.

That's just a Fenju map in a new tileset.

Think we wouldn't notice? Think again. =P
alot of things with that

a)how?
b)how would I get a Fenju map
c)if I did have a Fenju map you would have to make the a new map anyway!
because you can't copy an paste on A-map

Maybe I'm just paranoid but that third town looks a hell of a lot like Scarlet Town in Never Black & White.
I really hope it's not alot like, when I thought about that map, I dceied to make the map like that! like form my head! (so I did not copy a Never Black & White map)


ok alot of people thought my Vermillion looked to much like a Fenjiu map so I ahve edited it

vermillion_v2.PNG

hope you all like it
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Seen February 7th, 2021
Posted January 11th, 2020
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how?



thx!



alot of things with that

a)how?
just change the tileset???
b)how would I get a Fenju map
use the bugged alpha
c)if I did have a Fenju map you would have to make the a new map anyway!
because you can't copy an paste on A-map
yes you can! just save the map and load it


I really hope it's not alot like, when I thought about that map, I dceied to make the map like that! like form my head! (so I did not copy a Never Black & White map)


ok alot of people thought my Vermillion looked to much like a Fenjiu map so I ahve edited it

Attachment 46484

hope you all like it
PLEASE DO NOT STEAL OTHER PEOPLES MAPS!

You Map is an exact copy of my Map "Dahai" from my Hack Legend of Fenju
you just used another tileset
dunno where you got it from since i didnt release mapshots of it i think, maybe you got the old bugged alpha, it might be in there

but, pls, dont say it is not copied cause it 100% is
just look at my map and compare it to yours:
my original one (outdated already, i changed some things, it looks better now):
Spoiler:

and here is your copy:
Spoiler:

notice any similarities?
You even copied the building and tree placement!!!
its as if you just changed the tileset! there are a lot of tile errors btw...
youre like one of 4 persons who got me mad in pc... two were extremely getting on my nerves and the last one stole a background-image from my thread
i hope you feel guilty

oh and your new version ahs even more tile errors since now you mapped yourself and you cant map
Germany
Seen September 8th, 2014
Posted February 24th, 2014
110 posts
14.1 Years
Ok guys, i'm making a hack (don't got a name yet and it'll be german - the english version will be released l8r ;)) and here's the map of the starter town ;)

Map Name: Astoria
Map Game: Fire Red (German)
Credits:
-Xiros (the trees)
-Lix (the way)
-Zel!x (the stairs and the pier)
-Alistair (the rocks)

Mapshot:
Spoiler:

Ray Maverick

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Ok guys, i'm making a hack (don't got a name yet and it'll be german - the english version will be released l8r ;)) and here's the map of the starter town ;)

Map Name: Astoria
Map Game: Fire Red (German)
Credits:
-Xiros (the trees)
-Lix (the way)
-Zel!x (the stairs and the pier)
-Alistair (the rocks)

Mapshot:
Spoiler:
I don't think you're so good at towns comparing to your road maps.
rating: 6,7/10
comments: the tiles are not my taste,ask around if you cant decide what tiles to use.
This is a small town. Cool though.

Chimchar 9

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Seen September 22nd, 2016
Posted April 5th, 2013
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Ok guys, i'm making a hack (don't got a name yet and it'll be german - the english version will be released l8r ;)) and here's the map of the starter town ;)

Map Name: Astoria
Map Game: Fire Red (German)
Credits:
-Xiros (the trees)
-Lix (the way)
-Zel!x (the stairs and the pier)
-Alistair (the rocks)

Mapshot:
Spoiler:
Well i don't really rate maps often, but i simply had to rate this one cause it's a nice little neat town.
The tree placement is wonderful, the block edits are good too, but the two last reasons why i rated this map is cause of the mountain, it's just got an awesome shape to it, and so the other reason is the palettes there just so beautiful, but you might want to darken the tree palettes just abit.;)

Ok i give this map a 8/10.:)
Pokemon Green Diamond
Status: cancelled :(

Alice

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Posted April 29th, 2015
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I've edit a lil bit the palettes of the trees maybe you'll recognize the difference ;)
I hope you like it^^
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It's definitely a very nice map... I really don't like the path tho. It's like the grass is taller where people walk more often. That's not very realistic now is it?

Chimchar 9

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Posted April 5th, 2013
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I've edit a lil bit the palettes of the trees maybe you'll recognize the difference ;)
I hope you like it^^
Spoiler:
Yep that's alot alot better!
9/10:)
Pokemon Green Diamond
Status: cancelled :(

Mana

Age 31
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Seen March 25th, 2023
Posted August 18th, 2021
10,075 posts
14.3 Years
CollinP
3/10

Towns look better if you use similar looking buildings, you have a very wide variety from different tilesets.

Your town has no border. Look at all the other maps in this thread that got high ratings, all of them have either mountain or tree borders, whilst yours is just walk wherever you want.

The path that goes about the gym goes nowhere?

The trees in the middle are annoyingly regular, space them out a bit and make it look natural.

I know you were going for some kind of canyon effect, but the town is living in almost a perfect rectangle! Have a look at some of the mapping tutorials to see how to make mountains look more natural.