Map Rating/Review Thread Page 162

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BlitŻ

guahh my dog is so cute

Age 28
Male
Bay Area, Califronia.
Seen October 1st, 2015
Posted January 22nd, 2013
472 posts
14.2 Years
I have 3 maps for everybody to rate

#1

Map Name: Vino Town

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments : One day I felt like mapping, and I did! This is paired with one of the other maps below, Quro Village. This might be in a hack I might make, and if it is, It will be the second town

Credit to PunkRocker(I think he's the guy who made this) for the awesome rom base :D

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#2

Map Name: Quro Village

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments : As I said before, this goes with Vino Town. Quro village would be the first town in a hack. It has grass in it because it branches off into route one, and don't worry, someone will stop the player if he\she tries to go out.

Again, credit to PunkRocker for the rombase

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#3

Map Name: Alaway City

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments :This is the 3rd city for a hack I'm making by myself, Pokemon War: Winds of Change. It's not a final name, but It will be released in the scrapbox or progressing hacks(depending if 3 cities is enough to be in the progressing hacks) once I'm 100% finshed scripting the town. And I put the grass in simply becuase it adds the factor of untamed wilderness, which is a big idea of the hack. and I know about the tile error with the path, I had to put that there only becuase it shows the previous route, so please don't rate on that.

credit to mitchel1 for the tiles

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Thx's for rating my maps!;)

BlitŻ

guahh my dog is so cute

Age 28
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Bay Area, Califronia.
Seen October 1st, 2015
Posted January 22nd, 2013
472 posts
14.2 Years
Nice job Fan King, you did a nice job on the three maps you presented. I would have to give a high rating 9/10 just for the sake of continued improvement over time. I hope to see more maps from you in the future after seeing your fine work.

heh:D, you just encouraged me to post more of the maps I have from my collection.

#1

Map Name: Orono Forest

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: The map is connected with Alaway City(above) and a town called Orono Town(not posted). I know the door of the house in the top right house dosen't go with it, but I could get it in the tileset XD. So please don't rate on that

Credit to Mitchel1 for the tiles

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#2

Map Name: Currently Route 1 :P, but it's going to be changed

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: umm, none this time =P

Credit to mitchel1 for the tiles

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Male
Above the Gameboard
Seen October 17th, 2011
Posted August 6th, 2011
98 posts
14.5 Years
So this is my first post here, I learnt to map by stalking this thread, and looking at existing maps, i'm probably terrible, but hey ^^

Map Name: Something like Aroma Town, havnt decided yet

Base: Fire Red (U)

Hack: It's not around yet, but it's from my one which im working on
-And yes, i'm well aware of the bad tiles on the houses, I just noticed as posting this, so don't mark on that.
Map:
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Name: Route 1

From: Fire Red

Base: My hack


Im gonna change the cave path on the left hand side to match the right.
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Map:


Credits to:
-Saurav -For the trees, the ground, flower
-Wesley FG -For the path and the house
-Doktor Worm. -For the mountains
Germany
Seen September 8th, 2014
Posted February 24th, 2014
110 posts
14.1 Years
So this is my first post here, I learnt to map by stalking this thread, and looking at existing maps, i'm probably terrible, but hey ^^

Map Name: Something like Aroma Town, havnt decided yet

Base: Fire Red (U)

Hack: It's not around yet, but it's from my one which im working on
-And yes, i'm well aware of the bad tiles on the houses, I just noticed as posting this, so don't mark on that.
Map:
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Name: Route 1

From: Fire Red

Base: My hack


Im gonna change the cave path on the left hand side to match the right.
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Map:


Credits to:
-Saurav -For the trees, the ground, flower
-Wesley FG -For the path and the house
-Doktor Worm. -For the mountains
-MOP -For the Rombase :>

Your maps aren't that bad :/ But they're square and you got a lot of mapping- and border errors... The mountains in the right middle of the route... They look a bit weird... Your grass placement is wonderful :>
You didn't see some tiles of the roof from wesleys house right? You missed some... First map: 5/10 Second Map: 4/10

~MOP

Ray Maverick

Age 27
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Posted 2 Days Ago
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14.3 Years
heh:D, you just encouraged me to post more of the maps I have from my collection.

#1

Map Name: Orono Forest

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: The map is connected with Alaway City(above) and a town called Orono Town(not posted). I know the door of the house in the top right house dosen't go with it, but I could get it in the tileset XD. So please don't rate on that

Credit to Mitchel1 for the tiles

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This is amazing Kyle!I'd gladly accept any of your maps in my hack!
anyway,i dont see anything wrong,so 10/10

#2

Map Name: Currently Route 1 :P, but it's going to be changed

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: umm, none this time =P

Credit to mitchel1 for the tiles

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This map is great too!But there are some mapping mistakes i see.The edges of the ledges (lol) shoudln't be that way.
9.5/10


I hope you continue making maps. ;D

WetCurl

Would I like a Cookie?Wy naut?

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In Your Trash Can.
Seen July 30th, 2009
Posted July 18th, 2009
3 posts
13.9 Years
Ohkay,second try.

Map Name:Wesa Town
Game:Fire Red
Comments:It's another starter town attempt.Also,I decided to go with another tileset(Kyledove).The grass and pool behind the fence is for so you can come back around after obtaining some sort of HM and catch starter or rare pokemon.
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BlitŻ

guahh my dog is so cute

Age 28
Male
Bay Area, Califronia.
Seen October 1st, 2015
Posted January 22nd, 2013
472 posts
14.2 Years
it's too plain. the path is to big, and the upper right quarter of the map looks naked.

What I suggest is that you cut up the path more and trim it. make it more squiggly(couldn't think of another adjective)

Put more trees around the map and make it look more wild

I give it a 4\10

Kyouya

"baddest of the bad"

Drazil
Seen May 16th, 2014
Posted August 28th, 2011
338 posts
14.3 Years
Map Name: viridian v2 and gandan town

Map Game: firered and ruby

Comments:my fourth firered map and my newest ruby map

Mapshot:
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Kyo The pro


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Seen April 17th, 2022
Posted October 16th, 2021
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14.2 Years
Name:Route 1
from fire red
rombase:forgot whose
comment:this is just a simple route 1 i have done{been a long time since i map}it is unfinish as my com went crazy and shut itself off so i have not save the map at my advance map but fortunately i have saved it as a image{that is why it looks a bit crap as i have not finish it..xD}...rate it...
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Seen April 9th, 2021
Posted February 5th, 2017
6,779 posts
15.5 Years
I'll do this the proper way.
Map Name: We'll just call it X town.
Map Game: Don't see why this is relevant, but Fire Red.
Comments: None really, I'm just a little bored.
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I think you can do much better if you practice, but this is bad, to be completely honest.
The thing that stands out most about this is the fact that the mountains are completely linear. This is the worst thing that you can do for a rocky map like this. The next thing is the fact that the waterfall is funky looking, and so are the ledges next to the waterfall, not to mention that the lake is pretty badly shaped. Just look at cape brink for the correct way to make waterfalls. The houses are pretty small, and there is a lot of empty space. The flowers aren't distributed well, and I really don't mind the trees, except for the three trees right next to each other at the bottom. Lastly, I'm not a fan of where you put the signs and posts either. I won't talk about that little cave spot right there, since I don't know how to rate it. The best thing I can talk about in your map is that it has no tile errors, aside from the waterfalls.
Overall, I would give this map a 5/10.
you are a great scripter thethethethe, but you are a subpar mapper. Sorry if this rating was harsh, but I say it like it is.
Seen September 6th, 2009
Posted September 6th, 2009
140 posts
13.9 Years
Name:Route 1
from fire red
rombase:forgot whose
comment:this is just a simple route 1 i have done{been a long time since i map}it is unfinish as my com went crazy and shut itself off so i have not save the map at my advance map but fortunately i have saved it as a image{that is why it looks a bit crap as i have not finish it..xD}...rate it...
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Yeah, this is pretty good... Untill you look at the mini triees. When creating min trees in Firered or Leafgreen, you need to use the tiles correctly. Where are the tops of the overylaying trees?

You also used the same grass tile.

7/10


Aipom, Pikachu, and Eevee shall take over the world very soon... Very soon...

Map Requests Accepted JUST NOT FOR THE MAP RATING THREAD

Kyouya

"baddest of the bad"

Drazil
Seen May 16th, 2014
Posted August 28th, 2011
338 posts
14.3 Years
Map Name: littleroot v.2

Map Game: emerald

Comments: my first map in emerald
i gave the pokemart the pokemon center roof and the pokemon center the mart roof

Mapshot:
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Thing I've learned
I couldn't leave Pc if I tried
If nippon ichi isn't making soul nomad 2 I will This I swear

Favorite games
1.Soul Nomad
2.Shining force exa
3.most dbz fighting games
4.naruto ultimate ninja 2 (shino chidori ftw)
5.God eater/Disgaea/Mass effect
Thing I've Noticed
That I'm coming up with Random stuff to make the scroll bar activate
I'm an angry person
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Seen September 6th, 2009
Posted September 6th, 2009
140 posts
13.9 Years
Map Name: littleroot v.2

Map Game: emerald

Comments: my first map in emerald
i gave the pokemart the pokemon center roof and the pokemon center the mart roof

Mapshot:
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The roof replacement: Good, but origional. I did that once just for fun.

9/10


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Age 30
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Seen April 17th, 2022
Posted October 16th, 2021
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14.2 Years
Map Name: littleroot v.2

Map Game: emerald

Comments: my first map in emerald
i gave the pokemart the pokemon center roof and the pokemon center the mart roof

Mapshot:
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i will give this 3/10 because there is too many/big empty spaces.Try to fill it up with other tiles or make the map smaller.Another thing is the mountains,it is too linear.The mountains in our world will not look like that.it is scattered or places unevenly.That is how you make the mountain look natural....
Hope this helps you..xD
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Name:smallwood
Base:fire Red
rombase:MOP
Info:a map i do to practice back on my mapping skiils as it been a while since i map
here it is..rate it
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Pokepal17

More cowbell~

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Steeltown
Seen July 7th, 2011
Posted May 22nd, 2011
1,517 posts
14.6 Years
Map Name: littleroot v.2

Map Game: emerald

Comments: my first map in emerald
i gave the pokemart the pokemon center roof and the pokemon center the mart roof

Mapshot:
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3/10, the map is too squareish and I see a tile error. Also swapping roofs isn't a good idea because people may consider it as tile errors. Make it more natural by making the mountains folloing the same pattern and don't make the top rock layer just like the bottom rock layer. I would also advise you to add more flowers and map fillers to fill up empty space.
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.little monster

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Posted March 23rd, 2015
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Hai guyz.
I made another made out of pure boredom...

Too empty, unnaturally shaped, tiles used the wrong way, too blocky.

1/10

+10 for having a map.
-9 for having errors, blockyness, emptyness, and etc.
Seen April 9th, 2021
Posted February 5th, 2017
6,779 posts
15.5 Years
Hai guyz.
I made another made out of pure boredom...

I know that you can do much better than that.
The mountain shape is fine, but is bland at a lot of times. that unreachable lake there bothers me for a few reasons. For one, it's situated on a mountain. It is also ocean water, and the lake "edge" is too close to the mountain edge. And it may just be me, but the little black spots under the lake look like tile errors. The big slab of mountain tiles at the top are too empty, and is way too big, as opposed to the other ones. The trees are too linear, the flowers are badly distributed, and that building at the bottom right is basically pushed up against the trees(as well as the other buildings above that bike shop building). Don't forget that they are supposed to be known as 3D objects, and need their own space too. Lastly, the bike shop is pressed against the brick road, and the brick road just looks "off" to me. Even for an artificial road, it looks too square. I do like that you put in thin trees when it was needed and that you placed the gym,PC, and mart at good places. I don't like how big you made the map, considering that only one house, a shop, and a cave is accessible. And I didn't even see it, but you used the same grass tiles. I'd give it a 4/10.

Lover's Kite

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Posted September 4th, 2014
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Jaggy Town
By: [url-inline="member.php?u=160475"]WetCurl[/url-inline] /
"Well the player has to go through a long cave to get here,but they found Fly in the cave.The tileset is Kyledove."


Original Post: [url-inline="showpost.php?p=4872695&postcount=4048"] #4048[/url-inline]
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This map is really nice, the mountain border is just right, not to square, not to intricate~ Kyledove's tiles are a bit... overused but it's not that big of a deal. The tree layout could be a bit more complex, same goes for the sandy routes. The palettes, default tiles and the custom ones clash, I suggest finding a tileset that best suits that palettes or vice-versa. The center of your map should be more filling, instead of everything along the mountain border~ That's about it...I think. Yeah~ It's obvious you know how to use Advance Map, but you need to watch how you design the map layout.

7.5
out of 10.0

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Smallwood
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"A map I do to practice back on my mapping skiils as it been a while since I map."


Original Post: [url-inline="showpost.php?p=4873166&postcount=4049"] #4049[/url-inline]
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Let's see... the map layout is pretty nice, really simple. What bugs me first of all is the palette, it's a bit desaturated, maybe trying adding some vibrant colours, even if it's just abit? The second thing is the Pokémon Center, I don't really see a purpose in it being there... the map is waaaay to small in my opinion, but to each his own I suppose~

7.8
out of 10.0

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.little monster

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Posted March 23rd, 2015
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13.9 Years
My map is left out..xD
Name:smallwood
Base:fire Red
rombase:MOP
Info:a map i do to practice back on my mapping skiils as it been a while since i map
here it is..rate it
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The tree line can be made to look more natural, the water line is kind of..boring. Small. Nice palettes and tiles.

8/10