Map Rating/Review Thread Page 203

Started by Christos April 1st, 2007 9:39 AM
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Age 12
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sucking balls
Seen May 21st, 2014
Posted May 21st, 2014
429 posts
13.4 Years
Map name: Gateway Cave

original rom: Firered

Comments: My newest map. I think its good but im probably wrong. :P

Map:

Spoiler:


Meh, I'll give it 7/10

There's 2 tile errors; Do I see 2 signs?; It seems that the rocks needs to be spread out; IDK... It makes me wanna give you a 7/10 o_________o
>>>/v/

Quest

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Seen January 6th, 2023
Posted May 3rd, 2020
984 posts
14 Years
Meh, I'll give it 7/10

There's 2 tile errors; Do I see 2 signs?; It seems that the rocks needs to be spread out; IDK... It makes me wanna give you a 7/10 o_________o


Yeah you see the signs. Thanks for the feedback.
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On the moon
Seen April 20th, 2022
Posted March 17th, 2012
331 posts
15.8 Years
Hmm.. Another Starter Map?

Map Name: MapleLeaf Town

ROM Hack: Pokemon CopperBrown

ROM Base: NONE!

Here it is. Please rate in this order: Pros;Cons;Rate;Suggestions

Spoiler:
This is a nice "Nintendo" map, with good playability. But if you were looking for a natural style, keep trying. It's too square, and flowers aren't naturally spread out like that, they clump together. Also, try a bit of variance in grass tiles. Firered has 5 (I think) so try to use them all.


Playability: 10
Beauty: 6
Naturality: 3

Overall: 6.5

[EDIT] Oops, I forgot suggestions.

Clump the flowers together, and you don't need that many. Use all the grass tiles. Make it slightly less square. Then it's a perfect "Nintendo" map.
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Age 12
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sucking balls
Seen May 21st, 2014
Posted May 21st, 2014
429 posts
13.4 Years
This is a nice "Nintendo" map, with good playability. But if you were looking for a natural style, keep trying. It's too square, and flowers aren't naturally spread out like that, they clump together. Also, try a bit of variance in grass tiles. Firered has 5 (I think) so try to use them all.


Playability: 10
Beauty: 6
Naturality: 3

Overall: 6.5

[EDIT] Oops, I forgot suggestions.

Clump the flowers together, and you don't need that many. Use all the grass tiles. Make it slightly less square. Then it's a perfect "Nintendo" map.



Better Maps?

ROM Hack: Pokemon CopperBrown

Name: MapleLeaf Town and Route 601

ROM: FireRed

Please,
Please, Please, Please rate Pros/Cons/Rating/Suggestions (Sorry for JPG format. Stupid TinyPic...

Spoiler:



>>>/v/

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On the moon
Seen April 20th, 2022
Posted March 17th, 2012
331 posts
15.8 Years
Better Maps?

ROM Hack: Pokemon CopperBrown

Name: MapleLeaf Town and Route 601

ROM: FireRed

Please,
Please, Please, Please rate Pros/Cons/Rating/Suggestions (Sorry for JPG format. Stupid TinyPic...

Spoiler:



1st map: Much better, but still some squareness in the trees, maybe 1 more in each corner?

2nd map:
This map looks sort of like a formerly tidy path, that was sort of forgotten and had grass grow all over. If that's the sort of look you're going for, it's good. However, I don't think it is...

You see how you're using long grass so much? Put more trees in, and you won't need so much. And, I'm not sure if this will change the game too much, but mountains and rivers always look nice. :D (With bridges of course)

Oh, and you need the grass variance again.

Playability: 5
Beauty:4
Naturality: Grass, 7. Trees, 4. You're a bit mixed here.

Suggestions: Grass, Long grass, Trees and Flowers.
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Posted April 9th, 2011
165 posts
13.8 Years
Name: Copper town
Rom: Emerald
Style: Natural
Rom Hack: Pokemon Frost
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Age 27
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Manati, Puerto rico
Seen January 15th, 2011
Posted December 21st, 2010
251 posts
13.6 Years
my map of somachi town

hack: pokemon aero 42 shiny red

If you can give me any suggestions it will be greatly appreciated.


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Age 12
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sucking balls
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Posted May 21st, 2014
429 posts
13.4 Years
my map of somachi town

hack: pokemon aero 42 shiny red

If you can give me any suggestions it will be greatly appreciated.




Let me give you a rating... 2/10 and 5/10 << For beginners


I recommended you start learning tutorials, just like I did. Now lemme give you some suggestions...

Be Original Don't put the same water route, same size ect. be CREATIVE. Add some more trees because it is just too square. And you need windows on those houses, and PLEASE, PLEASE BE CREATIVE. That is all.
>>>/v/

Brendino

The Ruins of Alph
Seen 14 Hours Ago
Posted April 6th, 2023
8,567 posts
13.4 Years
Map Name: Saintony Forest
ROM Hack: Pokemon Xanadu Version (FireRed Base)
Comments: This was one of the first maps I've done, and I used Viridian Forest for the base (only the border).

Spoiler:

Thrace

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Age 32
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Seen October 2nd, 2016
Posted August 9th, 2010
1,048 posts
16 Years
It's been a long while since I last made a map.
The situation must be remedied.

Map Name:Narrow Path
Map Game:Firered.
Comments:My first map in a while. Damn, I forgot to add the different flowers.
Mapshot:
Spoiler:
Not one of your better maps. The layout is really quite poor and it feels too claustrophobic. The mountain shape is particularly bad, it just feels way to random... like you closed your eyes and dragged the mountain tile in some general direction. Grass placement is pretty bad too and the amount of flowers, bushes, puddles, small trees, grass paths and sand paths makes the map look too busy. The fences look like they've just been tacked on, they really don't belong there. The beach looks alright until you get to the water.

4/10

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Age 28
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Bay Area, Califronia.
Seen October 1st, 2015
Posted January 22nd, 2013
472 posts
14.2 Years
Map Name: Aloaya Region
Hack: Pokemon Saturn
Hack of: Fire Red
Mapshot:
Spoiler:

Comments: Just my region map for saturn ^-^, it's incomplete, I make the region map as I map the region :P

Map Name: Jaiz Path
Hack: Pokemon Saturn
Hack of: Fire Red
Mapshot:
Spoiler:

Comments: The route adjacent to Vensien town, and connects to Balen City to the North. ^-^
Age 30
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Tokyo, Japan
Seen April 9th, 2023
Posted September 16th, 2013
860 posts
16.4 Years
Name: First Town
ROM: FireRed
Comments: A very simple map.
Map:
Spoiler:
:O ur alive :P (or was I half-dead x3)

but to get to the point:

It looks very nice :) the only thing that bothers me is that the paths are so big..
And maybe the entrance to the bottom house it's a bit small but it's not ruïning the map or something like (not sarcastic :P) I give it a 7.9/2010 :)

:edit:
Bad typo :x
Seen July 19th, 2022
Posted May 6th, 2018
918 posts
15.8 Years
:O ur alive :P (or was I half-dead x3)

but to get to the point:

It looks very nice :) the only thing that bothers me is that the paths are so big..
And maybe the entrance to the bottom house it's a bit small but it's not ruïning the map or something like (not sarcastic :P) I give it a 7.9/20 :)
I believe you mean 7.9/10 (unless you wanted to rate it really low although you had a rather nice review ;P

Anyways I shall review the same map!

The path in my opinion is perfect, I like rather big paths in cities. No usually I am against the conformist Firered tiles but I get the point here for some reason. FankKingOmega tiles fit perfectly with your style. 8/10
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California
Seen May 1st, 2016
Posted February 1st, 2010
34 posts
14.2 Years
Name: untitled
ROM: Ruby
Comments: This is my first map that I'm actually pretty happy with. It's a starting town, I might add another house or two and make it a little bigger. The path in the middle is supposed to be a bridge and I'm going to change it when I insert the tiles.
Map:

Credit: creators of project mustang
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Age 27
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Slovenia
Seen March 30th, 2015
Posted July 24th, 2013
3,475 posts
15.2 Years
Name: N/A
ROM: Firered
Comments: None just a simple map

This map just feels... claustrophobic. It's so small the player can't even breathe. And it's very clumped too. The grass in not ordered, and scattered all over the map. I only like the flower placement.
I'm not going to rate it.

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Seen December 4th, 2016
Posted October 6th, 2013
444 posts
13.4 Years
Well i am starting mapping again this time getting gradually bigger each time i make a map by 6 tiles from width and heigth i'll post a new map when i get 18 more tiles in :3
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Well i am starting mapping again this time getting gradually bigger each time i make a map by 6 tiles from width and heigth i'll post a new map when i get 18 more tiles in :3
Bigger =/= Better.

Just use a normal space, like how big Route 1 is.
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