Congrats on a successful first post. A few things though. Please make sure to indicate what type of team this is. Is it in-game? NetBattle? Link battle?
Also, please include the nature, trait, and held item of all of your Pokes, to make sure you are taking full advantage of your moveset. Including EVs would also be extremely helpful, if possible.
As for your team, fixes, suggestions, and incoherent ramblings in
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Originally Posted by hydradestiny
This is my first team so i know for a fact it sucks. Please rate/ fix. Here goes...
Metagross @ Leftovers / Choice Band
Trait: Clear Body
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Agility / Shadow Ball
- Earthquake
- Meteor Mash
- Explosion
Good moveset. Agiligross is an excellent choice. I prefer CBgross, but that is just me.
Tyranitar @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Stream
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Taunt
Just be wary that Taunt is effective more in competitive battling, than against the pathetic AI.
Milotic @ Leftovers
Trait: Marvel Scale
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Hypnosis / Sleep Talk
- Ice Beam / Toxic
- Recover / Rest
- Surf
I really like Sleep Talk Milotic, especially in competitive battling, where you can absorb status and still attack while sleeping.
Gengar @ Leftovers / Shell Bell
Trait: Levitate
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Destiny Bond / Will-O-Wisp
- Ice Punch
- Thunderbolt
- Fire Punch
I would choose either Destiny Bond or WOW, not both. That limits Gengar's effectiveness a bit too much for my taste.
Heracross @ Leftovers
Trait: Guts
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk
- Brick Break / Rock Slide
- Megahorn
- Swords Dance / Rest
- Rock Slide / Sleep Talk
Heracross is another great Sleep Talker. Rest activates its Guts Trait, and now it can cause much pain to many different Pokes.
Flygon @ Leftovers / Choice Band
Trait: Levitate
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Fire Blast
- Rock Slide
- Substitute / Quick Attack
Blast over Punch. CBgon can work quite well.
So thats it.. Also be sure to mention if the frame of my team is of (do i need a hazer, rapid spinner etc?)
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A Hazer/Rapid Spinner/Phazer would only be necessary on a competitive team. Either Tyranitar or Metagross can be replaced with perhaps Forretress or Claydol.