Live, be free

Started by fallen_angel April 9th, 2007 8:24 AM
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Age 30
Female
With phantom_zangetsu ^.~
Seen March 7th, 2014
Posted July 24th, 2011
238 posts
18.2 Years
Hey, I haven't posted a poem in a very long time. But i'm coming back to the poetry thread. ^_^ I've never been good at rhythm so please bear with it. ><

Let us dance
in the rain,
let us cry
away all the pain.

Let us love
with no regrets.
Let us sing
of yesterday.

Live, be free
of past regrets.
Live carefree,
live happily.

I hope you enjoyed it. ;)

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~My pair: phantom_zangetsu , My Big Sisters .: Dreamer :., Midori Chi, My father Cybex Mewtwo, my brother karasuma My brother-in-law code zero the deluge~


Bittertown
Seen September 2nd, 2009
Posted December 28th, 2008
7,901 posts
19.7 Years
It's fun, short, happy... nothing too surprising, but the rhythm makes it stand out. I'm giddy for these kinds of rhythms, and I must say I'm totally biased because of it. For me, some poetry I prefer to read is in subtle whispers that poke you and catch your attention with every little pause... so this one got me.

Pocket Monsters Special!
Age 30
Female
With phantom_zangetsu ^.~
Seen March 7th, 2014
Posted July 24th, 2011
238 posts
18.2 Years
Thanks phantom_zangetsu for dropping in! ^__^ Also oni flygon I think that was the best post on my poems i've ever gotten. Thanks!

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~*~My PC Family~*~
~My pair: phantom_zangetsu , My Big Sisters .: Dreamer :., Midori Chi, My father Cybex Mewtwo, my brother karasuma My brother-in-law code zero the deluge~


Age 31
together with fallen,ontop of shukaku's head
Seen December 9th, 2008
Posted April 28th, 2007
517 posts
17.8 Years
heheh, its okay, hey hey, you know? i kida got inspired by your poem, so i made something just like that....well, a bit like it but....oh, just check it out later...hehehe

btw, good job again...hehe keep it up


lovingly and forever paired with the one and only, fallen_angel


~pHaNt0m~