Soft

Started by Yesterday April 22nd, 2007 3:48 PM
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Age 31
together with fallen,ontop of shukaku's head
Seen December 9th, 2008
Posted April 28th, 2007
517 posts
17.8 Years
mmmm? is that a free verse? i havent seen a poem like that one...till now...

it's short and it could use a little more detail...but its nice though...it kinda gave some rhyming words too...hehe...


lovingly and forever paired with the one and only, fallen_angel


~pHaNt0m~
Bittertown
Seen September 2nd, 2009
Posted December 28th, 2008
7,901 posts
19.7 Years
"Brevity is the soul of wit" Polonius from Shakespeare's Hamlet would say.

Although it's short, it's sweet and sums up a single brief moment, a mellow slow dance in a picturesque moment. I guess you should write a bit more because I'm getting used to your poems now...

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