I am just wonderin if the way i write the chapter is ok. And PM me if you please may check my chapters for a bit, i use Word 2003. But anyway for those that dont know about inteligent pokemon(which should be everyone).
The Legend explaining further will be in my sig soon and you can expect it expanded as a the 3rd sequel to this.
Introduction:
Humans don’t exist.Pokemon roam. But…Pokemon have the intelligence of humans.
In this world, there is everything as we know it. Global Warning, Lawyers, and Whoppers candy.
We have a young Totodile called Gratoh Kaynayngoa XXXXVI. A descendant of a legendary Feraligatr who had once save the world. Legend says the Feraligatr lived during an era of humans, but the legend is believed by few. Gratoh only wishes to famous like his Forefather. Gratoh lived trough school and college until he finally grew to be a hard working Feraligatr. Gratoh succeeds in many careers that he badly wanted to do. A Feraligatr’s lifeline is long, so he gets to do them all. But he doesn’t know the great adventures before he retires…
Now Gratoh is going to be a Lawyer, his first career is going to be a blast, there will be hints of Gratoh's next Career.
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For now, you have to adapt to the Pokemon with our inteligence.
Chapter 1
Preparations For The Great test
Gratoh the Feraligatr has waited for this moment all his live. It’s the ultimate test to find out, will he be a lawyer, or not? He was specifically dressed in an elegant tuxedo that to him looked silly but good in a way. In the Lawyer and Prosecutor training center of Croncashio town, the main trainer, Kalaman, a strict Golem, is determining what lawyer and prosecutor will go up against each other on specifically designed cases with both chances of guilty and innocent verdicts.
Gratoh is sitting on a chair in a giant auditorium with thousands of other lawyers and prosecutors.
Next to Gratoh was his friend Ractule the Blastoise.
“Hey Grath. You do know you’re up next.” he whispered to Gratoh
“Huh? How do you know?” replied Gratoh
“You did see they’ve been going trough last name alphabetical order right?”
“Uhhh… yeah.”
There was a moment of silence between the two. Gratoh was thinking versus whom he would go against. Kalaman continued babbling about the current lawyer and prosecutor.
Then Gratoh looked very baffled and tiny eyed.
“No, that doesn’t mean…”he said and stopped in mid sentence.
“Sorry but its true.”
“Our next lawyer and prosecutor is Gratoh Kaynaranoka” said Kalaman in a straight voice
Gratoh was once again very baffled, for saying his last name wrong.
“And Hamatariki Kumotikona”
Everyone calls Hamatariki, Hamat. He is a Makuhita. Everyone also knows he is a very decent and smart prosecutor.
Both got off their chairs and walked to the stage. It was difficult for both to squeeze their way through the multisizing chairs. They were relieved when they got to the stage.
“Gratoh and Hamatariki.” started Kalaman
“You two are here to face each other in this specifically designed case with a judge, with no knowledge of this case, of course. The winner will graduate to Class E. The loser will graduate to the temporary Class F. Therefore you two want to try your best, of course? Well only one will make it. OK? Without any further ado, enter these doors and report to case room 234.”
The two entered the yellowish orange door and walked a long way to the room, as though the hall seemed endless.
When they finally made it, they were relieved. Then some sort of agent came. The agent was a Meowth.
“Lawyer, please report to room 4 over there and enter room 1. Prosecutor, come with me then follow the lawyer” said the agent in a firm and serious voice. The two did as they were told to.
Gratoh enter the room and found 6 doors very separated. He entered Room 1.
Date: September 16, 2037 PDE 3:37PM.
Place: Croncashio, Lawyer and Prosecutor training center.
Training center practice crime scene.
When he entered, a female Growlite in an FBI looking dress came up to him.
“Hello there. My name is Deriakly. Are you the new lawyer?” said the Growlite.
“Uuuhhh… yeah” replied Gratoh
“Well it’s about time. So that old geezer Kalaman is slow! But anyways, you’re just on time for the case; it’s about a murdered baseball player called Balatum Gadon, a Dragonite of our greatest baseball team Drakogators.”
“OH MY GOD! BAL WAS MURDERED!!??”
“No silly, this is a practice case, Remember?”
“Heh? Oh yeah, sorry for the over reaction, he is my favorite.”
“So anyway, along with a detective, you have to find clues. The prosecutor may come here any moment now, so you may as well get into the baseball stadium and look for clues. Hey. Here comes the detective!”
As the detective approached, Gratoh saw the detective to be a rader though unusual happy looking Houndoom.
“Hello, Brankimlot Trefayr is my name. You may call me Brank. Is he the new lawyer?” said the detective
“He sure is.” replied Deriakly
“Alright Newbo Lawyer, come with me.”
Gratoh and the detective went into the baseball diamond. It was very big and looked like it was for giant and fit Pokemon.
“Bal was murdered right here.” said the detective as he pointed towards home plate. “It is said he was shot immediately when the ball was going toward the Homerun Zone, making Drakogators get a grand slam. Pokemon where too focused on the game to notice who shot Bal. Luckily a cameraman got big surprise and accidentally took shot at the people in the right foul zone. The picture was very zoomed in and clearly showed a Gardevoir wearing a hat of the team Drakogators were playing, Magipsychotos. As well as the gun she was holding. I have a copy to show you.”
The picture showed a Gardevoir with the gun in her right hand, she was in a crowd of Pokemon in a big surprise, also some other Pokemon like Abra, Snorunt, and Magikarp with the Magipsychotos hat, as well as a Gengar, who seemed to be the only one to notice the Gardevoir.
“The Gardevoir’s name is Dayaleene, just graduated from college.” said the detective “I have some pictures from the event, others said if you could look at these pictures, but you have no time since trial will start soon and I still have to show you some more.”
As Brank showed him more evidence and proof that Gratoh had to find loopholes and knots to undo to, time for trial was nearing.
"Also the verdict has a friend, she’s an Espeon called Rosanie, she will be on trial with us, also I forgot the Gengar you saw in the picture is called Hector von Tronktor III. Also on trial with us.” said Brank.
“Well as scary as he looks, he looks dim-witted.” replied Gratoh
“Oh! Well would you look at the time! It’s time for the trial! I’ll lead you there.” said Brank.
Brank lead Gratoh to the courtroom through the rooms Gratoh’s been to and to a different room were inside layed the courtroom.
Date: September 16, 2037 PDE 5:15PM.
Place: Croncashio, Lawyer and Prosecutor training center.
Courtroom
The courtroom was big but everyday looking and packed full of people, Gratoh saw were he was supposed to go, as well as Hector, Dayaleene, Rosanie, and Hamat on his prosecutor space.
When everything was in order, a judge, an Alakazam, got on his high space and started
“Mr. Hamat, Your opening statement if you will.” said the judge
“Sir, we are here at court because of accusation of Dayaleene, held as the only suspect to have murdered Bal, the famous baseball pla-“
“OH MY GOD!!! BAL WAS MURDERED!??!” interrupted the judge very loudly, Gratoh was more baffled and shocked than ever, his chin was literally down
“ Uh sir, THIS IS A PRACTICE CASE!” exclaimed Gratoh
“Huh? Oh yeah. My sever apologies everyone. Now let’s get court on.”
To be Continued