Pokémon Clash Of The Seven Titans

Started by THE HACK ATTACK July 10th, 2007 3:47 PM
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THE HACK ATTACK

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This story will be told over a period of time. Many will stare at amazement at the lenth of this story....

It all started a millenia ago, when the world of pokemon was young and Mew was the only legendary pokemon....

Then the Titans came and the world of pokemon changed and many thought it was a good change but noone knew anout the Titans plan to destroy Mew and every living thing...

The story actually begins when Ash Ketchum defeats the Sinnoh league and travels home to Pallet Town....

He was expecting a welcome home party, but he saw nothing that he remembered... everything was completely destroyed. And off in the distance he saw seven giant pokemon destroying everything in their path. They were Alakazam, Gengar, Jigglypuff, Meowth, Pikachu, Claydol, and a humungous Mewtwo.....

Ash, then ran to Prof. Oak's Lab to see only a stone directly in the middle of the room...

Ash picked it up and Pikachu sniffed it questioningly. All of a sudden Pikachu started to grow and grow....
Pikachu didn't stop growing until it was as big as the giant Pokémon that destroyed the town.
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First of all, you aren't making a good impression on me with the amount of typos found in your post. You made four typing mistakes. Plus, it's too short to actually count as anything other than a rough idea or a summary of the story.

But anyhow, right now your story just seems to be lacking something. All I can see is that the main focus of this is going to be seven giant Pokemon destroying the world. Maybe you'll add more to this.

I'm kind of leery of the "Mew was the only Legendary Pokemon" part. Only because Arceus is considered to be the god of the Pokemon world, and I find it difficult to believe that Mew created god. But maybe my view of Pokemon lore is different from yours.

I dunno. Right now this all just seems to be extremely confused. I have no idea what's going on. All I can think of is that Pokemon anime episode about Pokemopolis that had a giant Gengar, Alakazam, and Jigglypuff.

And what do you mean by "updates to the story will be in this post"? Are you going to summarize the plot here? Or just tell the whole story in this one post, which is difficult to do with the character limit for posts.

I'm just really confused by the whole thing. It all starts with Mew, but the story begins with Ash who defeats the Sinnoh league and returns home to find it destroyed? Yeah, I'm just so confused by this.

You need more description in your story to get more readers in. Otherwise, they all might be just really confused by what's going on and leave.

Oh, wait. I think I just realized what you meant by "updates to this story will be in this post". You don't have any final product to produce, so you're posting this as a "place holder" of sorts and adding to this as you go. It's not a good idea to post unless you have the final version of the chapter/story. You shouldn't rush into this.

But I do wish you good luck on keeping your interest in this project of epic proportions. I hope that you won't tire of this before the great lengths are achieved.

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THE HACK ATTACK

a hack attack is coming soon.

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In the deepest recesses of my own frail human psyche
Seen September 2nd, 2019
Posted June 20th, 2009
131 posts
15.9 Years
I mean the entire story will be told in the first panel and I will run it throuigh a spell checker. Yes, I did get the idea from that episode. You also forgot about the giant Claydol that was trapped in the giant pokéball in the Battle Frontier series

I believe Mew was the first pokemon due to the fact that he can learn any move... but I am open to other suggestions

And to kinda spoil a surprise the Pikachu mention in the preview/prologue IS Ash's Pikachu
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Seen December 7th, 2007
Posted December 5th, 2007
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Fix the typos, add better/more description, etc.....

I got 'kinda confused reading it....

Things like that.

It doesn't make any sense to me.

You jumped around way too much, IMO.
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