A days work(funny)

Started by Shinji_ July 12th, 2007 6:36 AM
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Age 31
Toronto
Seen October 10th, 2012
Posted November 10th, 2009
624 posts
16.2 Years
I was working for money becuase im poor
So poor I couldnt buy salt and water for my cancer soar
There was some people coming to my town and they wanted a tour

Yes I know I dont make money
One day I will have my honey
And I can lick it off my cheek when its runny

I was working in the farm yard
And then I saw this retard
He wanted me to give him some lard
And he took it away in his car

I KNOW IM LAME LOL xD
Age 31
Toronto
Seen October 10th, 2012
Posted November 10th, 2009
624 posts
16.2 Years
Hilarious!!! Its really funny!!!
Do I smell sarcasm, I hope not <_< becuase if its really horrible I dont mind if you show your true feelings B)
Age 30
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Seen November 26th, 2015
Posted June 2nd, 2012
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18.1 Years
I dont know whats so funny.
Its kinda sad, though. Its as if insulting a poor person.Instead you should help them.The poem...it would have been better if you choose a better topic.As for the poetry itself.Your good.You spell good, you also have some good rhyming.I know you can do way better if your not bored and do your best. ^_^
Good luck.
~ pink-tiger
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Age 30
Pinky Land!!!!
Seen November 26th, 2015
Posted June 2nd, 2012
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Yea I know I could actually make you guys hear some real poems that I got 89%+ In school I'll post em later and thanks for the compliment :)
Hehee, cant wait. ^_^
I just hope its soon.......

~ pink-tiger
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Age 31
Toronto
Seen October 10th, 2012
Posted November 10th, 2009
624 posts
16.2 Years
Winter is here the shivering cold
workers outside selling hot cider for gold
the poor ones finding bread crumbs under the snow
while the people in there house on the fire warming there toes

February brings the thaw
Waters gushing from its maw
Days are misty cold and raw
life begins to awake
winter sleepers get up and shake
winter bonds begin to break

:D They're
Age 30
Pinky Land!!!!
Seen November 26th, 2015
Posted June 2nd, 2012
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Winter is here the shivering cold
workers outside selling hot cider for gold
the poor ones finding bread crumbs under the snow
while the people in there house on the fire warming there toes

February brings the thaw
Waters gushing from its maw
Days are misty cold and raw
life begins to awake
winter sleepers get up and shake
winter bonds begin to break

:D They're

Wow, your talking about seasons.A much better topic. ^_^
Good words.. You can tell that you notice how seasons change and things move on and become something more. Its great..I must also say..Way better than the one before. This one's not funny though. Im sure you can make great funny poems as well.Jst not about homeless. Teehehee well good job. ^_^
~pink-tiger
My Dear Sisters: Midori Chi,Miss ReynaWe are the: HCSC My Twin:HazukiEvil Twin: Haruhi-chan
Age 31
Toronto
Seen October 10th, 2012
Posted November 10th, 2009
624 posts
16.2 Years
Yesh yesh I'll do that mommmiie xD

Listen to this other quick poem o.o I'll make some big ones tommmorow I guess

Its a hot summers day today
And my destination seems a mile away
No water around no voices being heard
The sand is boiling as if it was on the stove
Boy do I wish there was some snow
The cactus shimmering a grassy green
The vultures hunting looking mean
will i be trapped in this permnant sauna

TILL NEXT TIME XD
Age 31
Male
Santa Isabel, Mexico
Seen July 7th, 2018
Posted February 2nd, 2016
4,000 posts
18.9 Years
Yea haha, thanks I hope our fan club does well anyone whos reading this topic click the link on my siggy to join my club:D
Well now, that's actually quite pointless. Do it again and I'll give you a warning.
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