Age 29
Seen August 1st, 2010
Posted July 20th, 2009
201 posts
15.9 Years
-Chapter 1: Vacara Island! Pokemon Get Captured!

After a while, Ash, Dawn, and Brock left Pikachu in charge of all of the other pokemon. They were near Veilstone City, and the three left their pokemon on Vacara Island, a small island where pokemon can rest. They headed for a different island, called DeMay Island, where they can rest also.

Piplup, Turtwig, Pikachu, and Buneary decided to play tag. Pikachu was it, and the other three ran away. Buneary was running to the top of the island, and Pikachu followed her. Pikachu and Buneary kept running to the top. They ran past a dark cave, where inside were three other pokemon: a Weavile, a Ninjask, and a Houndour.

At the top of the island, Pikachu and Buneary stopped, as something floated toward them. They were the three pokemon from the cave: the Weavile, Ninjask, and Houndour on a floating platform.

"Hound! Hound!" Houndour said.

Houndour jumped off the platform, and used bite on Pikachu.
"Pika!" Pikachu said, screaming in pain.
Buneary jumped to the rescue and used Double Slap on Houndour. Houndour backed off, and Ninjask used his speed to get behind Buneary. He used Poison Sting on Buneary. Buneary got poisoned. Houndour put Buneary on his back, and jumped back on the floating platform. Pikachu ran after her, but Weavile used Slash. Pikachu was blown away by that slash, all the way back down to the floor level.

*****Floor Level*****

Piplup used Water Gun on Pikachu to wake him up. That wouldn't work. Pachirisu used Spark on Pikachu. Pikachu got shocked and finally woke up. Pikachu explained to everyone how Buneary got captured. They all decided to look for the baddies. However, the floating platform floated near them. This time, it was a huge plane. Weavile shocked all of the pokemon there, and kidnapped all of them except for Pikachu.

"PIKA! Pika..." Pikachu yelled, and cried a little bit.

*****???*****

"Vespi!" a Vespiquen yelled. It was an order to lock all of the pokemon pronto!

The Machoke there counted all of the pokemon they had. There were supposed to be ten of them! (Piplup, Turtwig, Pachirisu, Staravia, Buneary, Buizel, Happiny, Sudowoodo, Croagunk, and Aipom.)

Machoke counted, and only found 6 of them! Four of them escaped. The four that escaped were Aipom, Turtwig, Piplup, and Sudowoodo! Machoke called all the other baddies to look for them, and the four heard of it and ran away. The four altogether reached a dead end. Soon enough, a group of baddies surrounded them. They brought the four to Vespiquen. "Take them to separated cages, and make sure they are Pokemon-Attack proof!" she exclaimed.

*****Vacara Island*****

"Pika..."

A Pidgey flew near Pikachu. It was injured.

"Pidgey!!! Pid-pid-Pidgey!"

Pidgey explained that a Weavile slashed Pidgey away, because he was guarding treasures. Pikachu agreed that his slashes are powerful, and his friends were kidnapped. Pidgey explained that he saw a plane being controlled by two Machokes, and inside saw an Aipom in a cage. Pikachu wanted to know where Aipom was being taken, and Pidgey pointed to the area to the right. Pikachu said bye and ran all the way to that area.

*****Vacara Shores*****

Pikachu agreed that the place was too far away. Pidgey flew to where Pikachu was, and said that if Pikachu could use a Thunderbolt Attack on that switch over by the rocks, a Taillow would appear, and let anyone who was there fly all the way straight, where a small cave is found. In there, you can automatically transport yourself to the nearest island, PokeJungle.

Pikachu just ran to the rocks and was transported to that cave.

*****Poke Cave 1*****

Inside, Pikachu met a Sceptile.

"Sceptile, Sceptile!" Sceptile yelled. He challenged Pikachu to a Pokemon Battle. If Pikachu won, he can go through to PokeJungle.

Is Pikachu up for this match? Find out next time in the next chapter!
Age 37
Server Nehra
Seen May 18th, 2009
Posted November 3rd, 2007
468 posts
17.7 Years
Nice written, but i think you have to put in more detail! If you give the landscape and the surrounding more describtion and the actions the pokemons are doing you can create a very good fic! Just look at other fics for example to and read them to raise your experience with that. I am looking forward to see your next chapter.
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Age 29
Seen August 1st, 2010
Posted July 20th, 2009
201 posts
15.9 Years
-Chapter 2: Pikachu VS Sceptile! Save Aipom!

On the last chapter, Pikachu lost Buneary because of the fight with Weavile's team. Pikachu fell down to the bottom of the island, and got his friends kidnapped. However, four of them escaped, and Pikachu learned about where Aipom was being held captive. Thanks to Pidgey, Pikachu reached the entrance to the PokeJungle. However, to continue, he must battle a Sceptile.

"PIKA! PIKA-PI!" Pikachu yelled.
Sceptile made the first move. He unleashed a powerful bullet seed at Pikachu, but Pikachu jumped up and doged. Pikachu then used a quick attack to power up his speed, but Sceptile used Protect. Pikachu used a powerful thunder attack, but Sceptile fought back with a powerful solarbeam in the sun. Pikachu couldn't help fight back, so the solarbeam went through Pikachu's thunder attack, and hit him. Pikachu felt too tired and felt he couldn't go on. However, Pikachu used a quick attack, and Sceptile used another solarbeam. Pikachu dodged with his speed and agility, and ran to the right. He ran aruond in circles to confuse Sceptile, and Pikachu finally unleashed a powerful Volt Tackle. Sceptile was defeated.

Pikachu continued onwards. Pikachu stopped in the path, and used Thundershock on a few Oddish, Bellsprout, and Cacnea. They fought back of course, but Pikachu used Tackle on all of them. They were defeated, and Pikachu went onwards.

Pikachu then found a huge field area, covered with hills on the other side. On the hill on the right side, he found an Ursaring and two Snubulls guarding something. Pikachu knew it might have been Aipom they were guarding. Around the hills, two other hills were there, one in the middle and one on the left. On the bottom of the hills, there was a small river. There was a caged room ahead of Pikachu, on the bottom of the middle hill. He found another locked cavern to the left of him, guarded by two Sevipers. There was a huge boulder floating on a log boat in the river, going in circles over and over again.
Pikachu then needed to find a way to get to that hill. He looked around, and found an Altaria being attacked by a Machop and Croconaw. Pikachu ran over to that area, and yelled, "Pika-pika! Pika-pi!" Pikachu said that they better stop attacking Altaria, or else! Croconaw answered "Or else what?" Pikachu used Thunder on the both of them. Machop then used Earthquake, and Pikachu got stuck between some rocks. Croconaw used Water Gun. Four Swablu, guessed to be the children of the Altaria, pecked at the two pokemon. Soon enough, Croconaw and Machop were defeated. Altaria got up and showed Pikachu a secret room, the caged room. She opened it using Dragonbreath, and they all went inside. Inside, Pikachu was able to rest himself on Chansey's Healing Machine. He found Pidgey on a nest inside that room, and Pidgey gave him a stick with a red button on top. Pikachu thanked them all, and ran back outside. Altaria offered Pikachu a ride anywhere he would like, and Pikachu accepted. Altaria dropped him off on the Middle Hill.

Pikachu hid behind a big rock. He saw Aipom, who was caged, being taken in to a secret room behind them, inside another big hill. Pikachu needed to find a way to get inside. Pikachu then called Altaria. Altaria gently used small dragonbreaths to melt the bars, so she would not disturb the others inside. Pikachu went inside.

Inside, Pikachu walked slowly. He then found a Burmy hanging from the ceiling. Pikachu got scared, and used a thunderbolt on it. Burmy fell, and while trying to get his rocky self, Pikachu ran through. Soon enough, Pikachu reached a huge room. He found Aipom on the other side, still in a cage. Pikachu quietly ran to Aipom, who told Pikachu the only way to get him out is if you get the key from Ursaring. Pikachu then decided to find Ursaring. Ursaring went out of his room, and found Pikachu. Ursaring and the two Snubbulls charged after Pikachu.

Pikachu ran around the room in circles, and the other three kept chasing after him. Pikachu used Quick Attack and hit Snubbull #1. Ursaring jumped up and used Roar on Pikachu, and Pikachu got dizzy. Snubbull #2 headbutted Pikachu. Pikachu dodged and jumped up. He then used a Powerful Thunder on Ursaring and the Snubbulls. Ursaring fainted and dropped the key. Pikachu got the key and unlocked Aipom's cage. AIPOM WAS FREED!

*****PokeJungle Entrance*****

Before Pikachu and Aipom could leave the jungle, they both heard a huge noise, coming from the main field. Pikachu decided to run over there. He ran over there and found an earthquake. It was no ordinary earthquake, however. "Pika?" Pikachu said. He found all of the pokemon running and flying away. Pikachu then found that it began raining, and lightning flashes striked. The way out was caged, so Aipom could not get in. All the other ways and caverns were closed, and Pikachu had no way out. The earthquake striked again, and found a huge pokemon on the top of the middle hill. It had huge eyes, with a huge nasty growl.

What pokemon was it? Will Pikachu get out? Can Pikachu withstand all of the earthquakes and lightning? Find out on the next chapter!
Age 28
Twinleaf Town
Seen June 6th, 2010
Posted January 24th, 2009
312 posts
16.2 Years
It's good but, perhaps type out what the Pokemon are actually saying. This will make it easier for the reader to read. Only use the Pokemon voice when it's a humans' point of veiw or when you think it would be appropriate.
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Swampert the level 90 Swampert!