If I Died,Would You Cry

Started by Manaphy1128 July 21st, 2007 12:24 PM
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Age 26
Female
*shoots self*
Seen December 11th, 2010
Posted September 18th, 2010
867 posts
15.9 Years
Okay,this is one of those storys of my life things. Its probably not going to be extremely long as always. So,lets start.
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Day 1

Too many voices, Drea thought. Too many names. Too many words. Too many complaints. Too much for me to handle.
"Hello?" Julia said as she waved in Drea's face.
"Huh?" Drea perked up.
"You alive in their?"
"Yes."
"Okay."
Julia walked away. They come and go as always, Drea thought.They are all animals that want much and give little but complaints and critiscisim. I'm not like that.But they are.And always will be. They will grow up to be those people on those extremely trashy shows like Flavor of Love and The Girls Next Door and such. And I won't. I will give out my ideas to the world to read and listen to. I won't give up just beacause of critiscisim and name-calling.
Just then a girl bumped into Drea and Drea dropped her bag. The contents spilled over the floor. Someone laughed and picked up her Tsubasa volume 7. "Hey!"he yelled."You call our stuff trash?Look at this!" He then threw it higher then Drea could reach into someone elses hand.
"Look!"someone else said."Theres more!"she told them.She was holding up Drea's xxxHollic volumes 9 and 4,and Tsubasa volume 10.. Drea was getting more and more angry.
"Give them back." she declared. They all turned to stare at her.
"So she wants it back,eh?"
"Then take it by force!"
This started into another "Throw Drea's Books" game. All she did was wait for a teacher to come by. A teacher did,and everyone gave Drea's books back.
All of them are trash,she thought. The day will come when they will get treated as they treat me. They will. I will make sure they will.

Day 2


"Give me a shot to remeber.It will take all the pain away from me.Because then I will surender.To your feet I will fall down to be.It will burn off the ember.Takes all the pain away from me."Drea sang under her breath. Well,Drea thought.I have to do everything I can to drive out the rap on the radio. She had a game plan.She knew exactly what to do. They will pay.
-----------------------------------------------------------------And end chapter one. I will continue later.

Dress up in your best / So I can be proud of you

Melody

Banned

Female
Cuddling those close to me
Seen March 4th, 2018
Posted March 2nd, 2018
6,459 posts
18.6 Years
Please, For the sake of our sanity, For grammar's sake, Put spaces in between your sentences!
Like this. See. Every time you use a period you should put a space right behind it so you can start the next sentence. I'll read the story when you have fixed that problem.