Attempts

Started by ~Dai-kun~ July 22nd, 2007 8:03 AM
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~Dai-kun~

The black wind howls again...

Age 27
12,000 BC
Seen August 10th, 2016
Posted March 23rd, 2012
515 posts
16.2 Years
~Attempts~

Wonders in the world how I know what to think,
Would Destiny make me float or would fate make me sink?

I thought about it hard saying 'maybe I would see' ,
But when I pondered that it felt like the end of me.

Noon through midnight time could only tell,
My thoughts turned into actions that couldn't come out well.

Nature to disaster and metal into scrap,
In my head I knew all I needed was a map.

A foolish thought not a map of Fate,
I'd lose my way searching at this rate.

So the final attempt was to wait 'till the end,
Where I'll fly to the sky to reach Heaven.

Where all my Attempts die..
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Seen August 17th, 2009
Posted July 20th, 2009
925 posts
17 Years
<3

deep.

I don't read alot of Poetry actually, but when I read poems like this, it makes me wonder why I don't~ x3

I really liked it. It was cute, and had a splendid point.
XD; I actually liked the rythm alot, and thought that it flowed nicely~

Well, nice work :2:
~because everything in life has a beat~