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Old May 26th, 2004 (4:32 PM).
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    this is my own stuff, this is pretty difficult poem to understand...but it's about fanatics...

    Lover's Fame

    On my porch I sat there waiting
    Waiting for my Lover's Fame
    Hating so the sinful waning
    Staining all that we call sane

    Paining me, my heart is shaking
    Resembling an earthly quaking
    Staking out, on porch I'm waiting
    Waiting for my Lover's Fame

    Fame is such a wordly shaming
    Shaming all that call it gaining
    Gaining till their minds aren't feinting
    Feinting over my Lover's Fame


    feeed baaaaack!

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    Old May 29th, 2004 (10:07 AM).
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      Cool Poem with hard words! GOODY. Well, my interpretation of the poem (or pome, as people say @[email protected]) is that fame is not all as great as people think it is, and in a way it ruins your life, like you can never see your "lover" because their famous, and doing movies and stuff. Am I right?

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      Old May 29th, 2004 (2:15 PM).
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        Ah, Dakota. Always wonderful work from you. Very very similar to the styles of the old classic rock band Led Zeppelin. This poem is quite interesting and well written. I like it. No angst, which is always a nice thing. The same ole same ole gets very old every once in a while. For once, the big bad Blaine has nothing to criticize. Wonderful job, Dakota. Wonderful job.
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        Old June 2nd, 2004 (3:00 PM).
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          Woopsy Blaine...I got some angst comin! ah! It's about how people overeact to every little thing that may potentially damage someone. Even if the thing is realy insignificant...

          This Setting

          A place as cold and damp as this
          With lace on every orafice
          Can't face the lies with shaking fists
          That's it's a child's nightmare

          The slides and swings
          Are present here
          Those minute things
          Cannot adhere
          The damage done
          To such a mind
          As children loosely shown

          So why I ask
          Do these things stay?
          With warnings passed
          To all's dismay
          Are going to hurt
          And damage all we know
          And love


          yay...another one BOO ya!
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          Old June 14th, 2004 (7:39 AM).
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            His Hobby

            A sweet bird sings to all who hear
            And choose to think of yester-year
            Of months ago
            And weeks gone past
            Will burst asunder far too fast

            The whitest dove will always perch
            To those who think of family first
            To those who think
            Conceidely
            In them a thousand vultures feed

            A blue jay's feathers shown with flare
            Are things all birds would love to wear
            The ones who say
            "That bird is fake"
            To him? Ignore!...for heavens sake

            A Raven's dark and shadowed hood
            Is certainly mis-understood
            He doesn't not mean
            To send you back
            He just thinks he looks good in black

            Some birds are good and some are bad
            And some give lessons to be had
            To find the bird
            That's surely thine
            You have to open up your mind


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