Sprites I made (gee...) Page 2

Started by UnitRico July 26th, 2007 3:31 AM
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Age 30
Seen January 20th, 2013
Posted October 9th, 2007
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16.4 Years
Even if you can sprite better than he can (I don't know if you can, and I'm not gonna bother to find out), that's really nasty. Okay yeah express you don't like it, but that wasn't constructive at all. At least explain why you've wasted a minute of your life ¬_¬.

I myself think you've done a great job, considering you're an early spriter!! Keep it up :)
One thing I will say though is, on the outlines of your 2 grass fakemon, try and delete the corner pixels, and if you don't really get what i mean check this tutorial, it mentions it there quite well!

Nechu's Sprite Tutorial - deviantART

But otherwise, great efforts, keep at it dude!!
I know what you mean, and I thought I deleted these oixels, but I'll check later. And sonn I'll start on a new Pokémon and Cocove's evo!

~Cya, UnitRico

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Age 30
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Posted October 9th, 2007
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I kinda have to dissapoint you all :) I will first make a new Fake before I start on Cocove's evo (still noname and just a little inspiration). Also, the first few Fakes won't be 100% scratch 'cos I'm not ery good at it. I WILL reveal 2 new names now:

F010: Centged (Explanation: do it yourself XD, revealed later)
Evolves by Max Toughness in:
F011: Goliaur

I'm working on F010 now, btw

~Cya, UnitRico

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Thanks for all the good comments. And Mithos Kid, I'm really busy with a major request and I'm still in a contest at AWF, so that'll come later. AND: Burst ninja sent me some awesome drawings so I've got enough inspiration for a while. Talking about AWF, I've made another thread there, only the fakedex will be mostly here :) I'm not allowed to link to another forum, so I can't give a link, but don't forget what someone there once said:
Google is your best friend
NOTE: AWF (Anime Wolken Forum) is a Dutch site, but can be viewed in English.

~Cya, UnitRico

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Well, i'm not going to say bad things again. I am going to give you constructiv criticism.

You need to lighten up on your fakemon's brown colours. They are far to dark and you cannot see the facial features. Remember. SelOut
I don't 100% agree with you. I think only the shadows could be a bit lighter. But I think I'll keep it like this. It's a Coconut after all...and I'm lazy XD

EDIT: Edited soon :) And Luxator, please don't think I say I don't agree with you because of that 1 bad criticism. Criticism is always welcome.

I almost finished Centged, so I'll upload it soon.

~Cya, UnitRico

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Posted August 25th, 2007
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You may not agree with that but you should at least make the browns a little lighter. Pokemon is a cartoon/game. Light colours are used. Even on dark pokemon, the colours are lighter than dark. Make refrence to other pokemon with the same colour and take ideas from it.
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You may not agree with that but you should at least make the browns a little lighter. Pokemon is a cartoon/game. Light colours are used. Even on dark pokemon, the colours are lighter than dark. Make refrence to other pokemon with the same colour and take ideas from it.
You know what, you're right! I never can get a real black color for my sprites. Still, I'm far to lazy to make all the colours again. I used Exeggutor's, but I needed 1 more, which I couldn't make. So I keep them how they are now.

~Cya, UnitRico

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Ok guys, I'm sorry to say, but you will have to wait until tomorrow or the day after that. I'll probably release Centged next week. Tomorrow I start on a major request for a hack (8 ghosts) and also tomorrow the voting round for the AWF contest starts. IF I go on to the second round, we have to revamp a R/B sprite...I made this one:

Please, I need rates. Please...

~Cya, UnitRico

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Posted August 16th, 2007
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Ok guys, I'm sorry to say, but you will have to wait until tomorrow or the day after that. I'll probably release Centged next week. Tomorrow I start on a major request for a hack (8 ghosts) and also tomorrow the voting round for the AWF contest starts. IF I go on to the second round, we have to revamp a R/B sprite...I made this one:

Please, I need rates. Please...

~Cya, UnitRico

its a little...distorted, or, really its teeth are the only things that are distorted
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its a little...distorted

(filler)
Ehrm...instead of saying (filler), you can better say: its a little...distotred BECAUSE:...saying (filler) is strictly forbidden (i thought) so you better edit it :)

~Cya, UnitRico

Well...I've updated the Word-Doc and it's now in the first post. I'll make a "real" Pokédex later with all info of the Fakes in it. And tomorrow, earlier then I've planned, I'll reaveal Centged! (I think some of you will be a bit dissapointed when you see it. I just have a feeling about it...)

And the voting round started in the sprite contest on AWF! And it's not going bad :)

~Cya, UnitRico

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Cool. My favorite is the water Cyndaquil. It just seems really cool. Also the grey Deoxys is cool. That particular version of Deoxys seems to be good for the colors, but i think that the Defense version would be even better Grey.
Yeah, that would look cool indeed, but I couldn't find it when I made it :)

And, as promised, here's Centged, number F010:

F010-Centged
Name: Centaur-Midged
Type: Normal/Fighting
Pokédex entry: CENTGED live in foggy forests where they won't encounter men. People misused them a long time ago, but they were set free by hordes of GOLIAUR, CENTGED's evolution.
Special ability: Run away/Speed boost
Evo line: Centged --Max toughness-->Goliaur
Moves:
-Tackle
7-Growl
12-Quick attack
19-Bulk up
26-Double kick
31-Agility
38-Leer
45-Triple kick

~Cya, UnitRico

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Posted November 17th, 2009
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okay~ long tims since ive been here :p hello!
i really do love the funsions (quilava ones<3) theyre very well done, looks pretty fab~ all in the right place.IMHO, the scisor trainer needs a little bit of work, the head seems to attach to the body at the front, mebbe add a darker shade only a little though, to seperate it. :3?
also, the shirt looks liek it coudl do with a tad bit of work... hard to explain, but the colours look to.. plain? just touch up the shading again~ itll looks awesome(er~)
i really do love those re-elements~ if ya wanted to make the cynaquil look more watery, turn it into a spout? like a whale does? with drip-drops and stuff~ <3 (ahah, though i do know, once ya finish a sprte, you really dont facy doing anythin to pazzazy to it from my own expreiece~)
no comment on the LOTR sprites.. they just looks a but messy, but im not p'ticularly a LOTR fan~ so im not one to talk/know~
The colours on the dracula seems to be quite the same as on scisor.. its.. plain.. no pazzaz. i think if you added a tad more shading, took away the REALLY bright red you used (cant tell if its defult paint coour or not, but if it is, shame on you ahahah~ ^^') just tone it down, add shading~ itll look great~ honest~
i just LOVE the concept of pidgong, so graceful and pretty~<3
however, you need to shade the lines a leeeetle better imo.
The pokeball and the recolour are just fine,
and the double trainer re-colours look again like paint colours to me, but what do i know, eh? :3
even if you dont change the sprites, all i mean is for this comment to help you :3 so next time you sprite, just think of the colour and shading a little? remember, shading the lines is just ad important as the rest~
keep it up~ oits some great work! you'll improve so fast, and itll RULE~ 8D!

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Posted October 9th, 2007
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Spoiler:
okay~ long tims since ive been here :p hello!
i really do love the funsions (quilava ones<3) theyre very well done, looks pretty fab~ all in the right place.IMHO, the scisor trainer needs a little bit of work, the head seems to attach to the body at the front, mebbe add a darker shade only a little though, to seperate it. :3?
also, the shirt looks liek it coudl do with a tad bit of work... hard to explain, but the colours look to.. plain? just touch up the shading again~ itll looks awesome(er~)
i really do love those re-elements~ if ya wanted to make the cynaquil look more watery, turn it into a spout? like a whale does? with drip-drops and stuff~ <3 (ahah, though i do know, once ya finish a sprte, you really dont facy doing anythin to pazzazy to it from my own expreiece~)
no comment on the LOTR sprites.. they just looks a but messy, but im not p'ticularly a LOTR fan~ so im not one to talk/know~
The colours on the dracula seems to be quite the same as on scisor.. its.. plain.. no pazzaz. i think if you added a tad more shading, took away the REALLY bright red you used (cant tell if its defult paint coour or not, but if it is, shame on you ahahah~ ^^') just tone it down, add shading~ itll look great~ honest~
i just LOVE the concept of pidgong, so graceful and pretty~<3
however, you need to shade the lines a leeeetle better imo.
The pokeball and the recolour are just fine,
and the double trainer re-colours look again like paint colours to me, but what do i know, eh? :3
even if you dont change the sprites, all i mean is for this comment to help you :3 so next time you sprite, just think of the colour and shading a little? remember, shading the lines is just ad important as the rest~
keep it up~ oits some great work! you'll improve so fast, and itll RULE~ 8D
(made a spoiler XD)

Hmm...I never saw you around, so I guess your right (I'm here not so long yet, I guess)

Thanks, all comments that give a "why" (you don't know what I mean, do you? XD) are welcome. I know the shading is the most importatn, it's also the most irritating IMO to make.

@Burst ninja: Yeah, well...the tail...I wanted to scratch something but it didn't look really well so I kept it like this...

~Cya, UnitRico

Gogo Pokémon Gale!