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Old July 26th, 2007 (11:35 AM).
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    I am planning to write another fic but I need help. I have two ideas, one is a story that takes place in Sinnoh where children are mysteriously dissapearing. The other idea is a story about Team Rocket and it's plan to capture Ho-oh and the legendary dogs. Please give me feed back on which would be a better story.

    Main Characters in Story 1: Sinnoh Nightmares of Doom.
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    Lewis
    Maybe: Lucas

    Main Charcters in Story 2: The Bells of Legends.
    Giovanni
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    Marina
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    Old July 26th, 2007 (1:50 PM).
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    Both of them sound good to me. Of course, all that you gave is the basic information of each idea, so that's all that I have to go with. Right now, they could both be good ideas.

    Think more about each idea and see which one you can get more ideas for. That could help you decide.

    I would say that you should try your hand at the Sinnoh children story. I know that you've been writing a few stories about Team Rocket, and this one would be a change of pace. It could be refreshing for you to step away from the action-ish fics and write a mystery. It could be a good experience.
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    Old July 26th, 2007 (2:46 PM).
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      Well, I'd go with the disappearing children story. If you do, I personally think your title would sound better without the word "Sinnoh" in it. I'm picky.

      I'd also use original characters, not Dawn and Lucas.
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      Old July 26th, 2007 (3:08 PM).
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        i like the rocket one sounds oldschool which i like old school but that is just me
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        Old July 26th, 2007 (4:06 PM). Edited August 30th, 2007 by Adventure-Chan.
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          Old July 27th, 2007 (8:49 PM).
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            Old July 28th, 2007 (9:22 AM). Edited August 30th, 2007 by Adventure-Chan.
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