a romantic rap...rate it or i'll eat u!

darkblastoise89

mech lover
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    i'm typing as i think of this...

    when you say my name
    i get in a strange daze
    feelings mixed up like a maze
    some primal kind of craze
    used to think it was a phase
    but it's lasted many days
    and it's you, i realize that has my mind in a haze

    i'm not used to thinkin about someone consantly
    whatever hold you've got me in,
    i don't wanna be free.
    you don't see the effects that you have on me
    and it's impossible to describe your gravity

    you keep me interested even when i wanna go
    you're so different from every other girl i know
    i just wanna show you,
    i wanna get to know you
    don't listen to the lies
    that other people told you
    i just wanna look in your eyes as i hold you
    and let the truth of my love unfold you...

    day in and day out,
    you're the one i'm thinkin' 'bout
    you turn my eyes to waterfalls
    and my toungue into a drought
    i couldn't imagine my life being without
    the person that keeps my love locked up
    without a doubt...
    -matt​
     
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    This one is beautiful, Matt! *huggles* I can tell you took the time to write it, even if you made it up as you were typing. XD And since it's a rap, I like how in each stanza, they all end with a word that sounds the same as the last one on the line before. Well done, Matt! ^_~

    ~Kelsey
     
    Hey Guys!!! That's so cool!! You poems just keep on getting better and better ^_^
     
    I love it,thats how I feel bout this girl I love.Its word for word.I couldn't have done a better job.I give it a 999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999
     
    okay.....sure....well note to all when you rate this, please tell me a number out of ten and also what you liked/didn't like
    -matt
     
    Yeah, I'll give it the same as Raven. Maybe even a 9.999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,9999,999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999etc.
     
    Oh my God, that's so good it's scary! Good job! ^_~
     
    wow after like a billion months from the time i posted everyone wants to rate XD
    thanks everyone ^ ^
     
    No problem. I'm glad to of rated it. ^_^
     
    I have a rap:

    There was a rabbit hole, so I shat in it

    well techically I stole it from someone else, but... he doesnt use the net
     
    Why do you have to lie about your age, I freely admit that I'm 26 and love Pokemon, why cant you just be open Drugs.

    Drugs is actually 24 everyone, he just get a little shy
     
    Shi-goyle said:
    Why do you have to lie about your age, I freely admit that I'm 26 and love Pokemon, why cant you just be open Drugs.

    Drugs is actually 24 everyone, he just get a little shy
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    *sighs* It's true.. it's all true *runs out crying*...
     
    When i first meet my girlfriend Nancy i felt the same way i give in a 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/10
     
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