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A Small Rap

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    • Seen Jun 28, 2006
    I was bored and I made this quick rap...


    Ya got one shot don't miss
    Its now or never just give her a kiss
    You always liked her just ask her out
    Don't wait one more second they all count
    Cuz soon you'll be too old to date
    Who's gonna want you once your second rate
    Do it now cuz your young and handsome
    You will go all your life sayin "Never got some"
    Some what? Dates thats what I meant
    Don't be shy she likes you too
    Theres no need to look so blue
    And if you do I feel sorry for you
    Cuz being blue wont do a thing
    Do it now give her a ring
    Make sure she's yours someone can take her away
    Hurry up theres only one way
    Give he a kiss
    And make sure you don't miss

    please give any comments and FRIENDLY critizism
     
    I liked it good work. I liked how it rhymed. I am not a big fan of rap but that was a great song.^^
     
    its good i might give her a ring XD its more like a poem or the chorous to a song
     
    It's more of a poem than an actual rap. Pretty good though.
     
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