AAJMMSW (aaronandjoseph Megaman Sprite World)

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    A new comic, Yay! PLease rate the series 1-10, feedback is wanted! THank you!


    [PokeCommunity.com] AAJMMSW (aaronandjoseph Megaman Sprite World)


    [PokeCommunity.com] AAJMMSW (aaronandjoseph Megaman Sprite World)


    [PokeCommunity.com] AAJMMSW (aaronandjoseph Megaman Sprite World)
     
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    *sighs* Joseph, I told you not to put anyone cusing! Its rude... Someone will get you in trouble for that *calls* XD. (PS I was the one who first sees his comic XD, We are good frinds ^_^;; except he is so freaking annoying...)


    ~Aaron~​
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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS IS SOOOO FUNNY!!!! Oh, wait this isn't a joke comic? Well put it simply, it sucks :D BUT I SHALL HELP YOU!!!!! First read this for a good tutorial. Now, you have no background or a 1 colored background which is a no-no for sprite comics. Then it's not even funny. It looks like you just made up stuff as went along. The textboxes still have unerased lines, so fix that up. Than, you can't spell :O. Run it through word and paste it into your comic. Your character never moves at all, and he doesn't even move his mouth. Put it simply this comic is total and utter crap, put it not simply, read above.
     
    Ehehehe, I am the one who told him that, he is praticly my brother, I see him every day at school. But no, he won't listen to me, Joseph don't read that tutorial, just call me. He is'ent new at this, but he is in it for the fun, he dosent care about graphics...


    ~Aaron~​
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    Aaron5367 said:
    Ehehehe, I am the one who told him that, he is praticly my brother, I see him every day at school. But no, he won't listen to me, Joseph don't read that tutorial, just call me. He is'ent new at this, but he is in it for the fun, he dosent care about graphics...


    ~Aaron~​
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    Umm let me ask one teensy question...do I really care? I'm just giving tips.
     
    Not to be mean but AHD is right your comic does need major improvements. Sorry if this upsets anyone.
     
    Armadillo you are a victim of people who can't stand criticizm, you critic them, they hate you for it.... You speak your opinion and people think you are a cold heartless monster, thats just the way people are....


    the comic was okay, but backgrounds would bring out the comic some more =]
     
    The text boxes are messed up, there's no background and the 3rd one is hard to read. And ripping off the Empire Strikes Back isn't cool. 2/10.
     
    I thought it was a hillarious comic ^_^ you should really continue it, great backround! Amazing sprites and very well done plot! If you need any suggestions for the next adventure or a bad guy sprite or anything like that just pm me, i'll be more than happy to help! ^_^
     
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