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mulch_ar

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    mulch_ar's fakes and stuff

    So I haven't sprited for a looong time and I don't know if my sprites are decent enough, so let's begin.

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    Left-right: My own fakemon, Fourant (Bug, Electric) and Sixlash (Bug, Ground). Then a Watermelon shaped fakemon called Wamow (Grass, Water). Another fakemon I named Burnthill (Fire, Ice) that was based on a bear then I epicly failed to sprite it -,- But I like how it turned out. Last but not least, It's Picowatt. Yes, it's not my design, it's FangKing's.

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    L-R: During that time, I got a major spriter's block. The first one is Dravinus (Grass, Dragon), my favorite fakemon I've designed. The second one was based on Smogon's CAP 9, just for practice. The third one is Stappid, Atari93's design from DA. The fourth is Mool, Doshkun's design from DA also (I've got their permission).

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    Drifloon, fully scratched.
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    My friend asked me to sprite this, I didn't even know what the hell is this thing (yes, it's Domo -,-)

    C&C Please ^^

    Oh yeah, please Do NOT use my sprites for anything. Thank you
    (Also, check out my DA Account, let me know if someone uses my sprite)
     
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    Haha amazing mate ;)
    You should do an Entei and i'd love you forever :P
    Thanks :D Well, I can't promise since exam is just ahead
     
    These aren't bad, but they could use some touching up.

    For your old ones: the legs and antenna/mandible on Fourant which face away are too small. Things that are further away should look smaller, but not that small. The same goes for Sixlash. Wamow (I really like that name) could use a more bold outline for the mouth. It doesn't really stand out. Some kind of outline for the eyes would be good, too, because it doesn't look so good to have the whites of the eyes blending with the face. It's stem varies in thickness so I'd smooth that out. Burnthill's ears should have a stronger outline and Picowatt's nose/beak is hard to see because it's small and the same shade as the face with an outline which is only slightly darker.

    With the new ones: Dravinus is pretty good. Shading and line art are definitely better. However, I can't really tell what's going on in the middle of the head. There's a green curved thing and I just can't figure out what it is. The drill-mole-thing (is it called CAP 9?) is pretty light and rough with its outlining. Stappid pretty much gets everything right, but the pink petals (beads? polyps?) could have darker outlines on the right/lower sides and maybe make that other foot more noticeable. Mool looks nice. Good colors, good line work, good perspective and proportions. It's pillow shaded a bit, and that's not standard for a pokemon style sprites, but it's not bad.

    I like your Drifloon, but I would give him a little more hair on top. Domo has some of that same perspective problem as some of your earlier work where the closer parts are too big or the farther parts are too small depending on how big they should be compared to the body.

    All in all it's pretty good and you should make more. Try out some more vibrant colors, too.
     
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