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[AJUST]

Just wanted to show you guys some of my stuff...


Heres' my buddy Kurachu...

Some follow pics I was working on...

My Trainer Card...

Please check out my Animated Comic, FBH over at DeviantArt...
https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18942794/*

*Download it, right-click and view in quicktime... for best results.

(FBH = Flat Broke in Hoenn, which is set in a Hoenn where everything isn't free...)

PLEASE DON'T STEAL.

 

[mew is real619]

that was the greatest comic i've seen so far
plaease pm me if you want to be friend and tell me more
if your going to make another comic

 

[AJUST]

that was the greatest comic i've seen so far
plaease pm me if you want to be friend and tell me more
if your going to make another comic

Thanks. ;)
I'm just as proud, it's one of my best works.

I was planning to make episode 2, but I'm quite busy right now. It's still a possibility though.

 

[MegaFuz]

The outline on Kurachu's tail and ears could be improved. The black outline on the lighter areas look really bad. The follow pics look good for the most part, the only complaint there is on the first Bulbasaur pic it looks like you missed the teal on the head. The head being colored the same as the bulb looks off. As far as the trainer card goes, I'm not a big fan of the bigger version but there is some cool stuff in there. When I get more time I'll be checking out the comic, but from the little preview there it looks really good. :P

 

[AJUST]

The outline on Kurachu's tail and ears could be improved. The black outline on the lighter areas look really bad. The follow pics look good for the most part, the only complaint there is on the first Bulbasaur pic it looks like you missed the teal on the head. The head being colored the same as the bulb looks off. As far as the trainer card goes, I'm not a big fan of the bigger version but there is some cool stuff in there. When I get more time I'll be checking out the comic, but from the little preview there it looks really good. :P

Thanks for the constructive critisism. ;)

I see what you mean with Kurachu, The bulbasaur's head isn't really the same colour as the bulb :P , and thanks for the Trainer-card compliment. (Even though it's not your thing.)

 

[pokemon_gal1993]

yeah,that is the greatest animated comic:DPlease tell me when you make another episode too^_^

 

[AJUST]

Hmmm... I'll bookmark this and post here if I ever make another.
*It might be never, sorry.

 

[Sylphiel]

Hah, that animated comic was a neat idea, I thought. Definitely more unique than a lot of other comics.

Since sprite comics and trainer cards aren't a commenting specialty of mine, I'll stay on your regular sprites. The Kurachu looks interesting, though I'm not sure if that gray-brown outline color on the tan(?) areas works too well...

Got nothing to say about the "follow" sprites, really, except that I think they look good. Keep up the good work. ^_^

 

[AJUST]

Thank you so much. I now notice that Kurachu could use a little fixing up, but it's an alright "idea" huh? ;)

There's another custom Pokemon of mine (...for which I can't find a name...) at My DeviantArt.

 

[Draik]

The comic looks kinda grainy.
Try resaving the frames or use a different animation program.

 

[AJUST]

The comic looks kinda grainy.
Try resaving the frames or use a different animation program.

I know about that.
It not exactly a problem, as such.

;) It's the gif compression. I like gif, and it's the only way that I have to save it, since windows movie maker distorts the movies.

 

[DarkUmbreon]

cool pics good job,really good job

 

[Valdorath]

You should open a shop for edited pokemon like Kurachu. Kinda like what Dawnstar did(might want to get her permission then).

 

[AJUST]

Thanks for all the awesome responses everyone, I really do appreciate it!

P.S. I dunno about a sprite shop... Kurachu took a while to come up with, so far I've only ever "invented" 3 pokemon... *One of which is at my deviantart, if you wanna go look.

 

[~JapaneseWolf]

where did you get the pinball sprites for your t card, i've been looking for them but i haven't found them yet.

 

[AJUST]

Here we go:

https://dynamic.gamespy.com/~psypoke/dex/picdex.php
https://sprites.fireball20xl.com/NSA/HTML/Poke/index.html

Check them both out, the first is very interesting, and the second is just as great.

 

[~JapaneseWolf]

thankyou ADJUST *gives rep for helping me*and the first one is interesting.

 

[AJUST]

No problem. It's AJUST (No 'D'), by the way. ;)
Thanks for the rep.