An elaborate loss for words

xDaRK_SuiKuNx

.somewhat of a devil.
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    I've been thinking really hard lately...
    Losing sleep...
    Over and over, I see you in my dreams.
    Visible, yet transparent like a ghost...
    Ethereal like an angel, clothed in the moon and stars...
    You come to me as clearly as you do now,
    Only-something is different about you...
    Under the surface, when i'm with you, I-I feel warm...
    Something I haven't felt before, at least I don't recall...
    Outside the realm of what i know....I feel kind of enchanted
    Maybe it's-no, not me. I can't be in lo-
    Under your spell, I'm seeing things slightly different...
    Could it be I finally found that special someone?
    Hold me here-I like how this feels. You have me at loss for words.
     
    Hey pretty cool man. Amazing how the begining letters make "I love you so much"
    Very creative. Nice work btw.
     
    That's nice, Matt. I love how you made it say "I lvoe you so much". Very nice touch.
     
    Wow, an acrostic... such great use of words, Matt, I love this one ^^ I love how the person narrating the poem feels disbelieving that they are in love ^^
     
    Well Matt there's always going to be at least one person reading your poems. ^_^
     


    It is really good and creative, Matt. Keep it up, good job. ~origin
     
    Weeeeeeee, another wonderful poem Mattie! ^o^ I like the style you used too. It's all full of acrossticness, it's very cute. <3<3 Well, I see nothing wrong with it, everything looks wonderful! ^o^ Keep up the great poem-writing Mattie. 8D

    ~Kelsey
     
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