Anger

[Abskull]

Thanks to Cybex Mewtwo who encouraged me to continue writing my poems ^_^!
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Anger is a pain
A volcano that's about to erupt
An ember
Which when you hold,
It burns the flesh of your palm
A needle to the brain
Trying to confuse you
Trying to hurt you
Like a knife to the heart
Making you unaware of your friends' and family's feelings
Like a gas
Poisoning the soul
Choking the spirit
But anger can be defeated
With a hug
Some friendship
And some courage
Anger can be destroyed
Which clears the mind

 

[Eon-Rider]

*claps* that was brilliant! I enjoyed reading that.

 

[Abskull]

Hehe... thatnks! ^_^ It's one of my more darker poems.

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

I actually pictured a small movie to go along with this. Very well done Abskull. Simply brilliant.

 

[fallen_angel]

That's a really great poem!

 

[Kalylia]

It was a nice poem, Abskull, thanks for sharing it with us. I really enjoyed the different ways you explained anger to be harmful, and each of them was as true as the next. Again, thanks for sharing it with us!