Contest Romance

[.Eevee-Chan]

PROLOUGE:In a town called Aqua Ring there is a young girl named Lea.She has been inspired by her mother to be a coordinator.As she grew up she found and injured feebas washed up from a nearby beach.She cared for it,loved it and when she turned ten she decided to start a journey with her partner feebas.

well i hope you enjoyed that one,but i have to go off now!! comment me or give me some suggestions to improve my fan-fiction!!

 

[jimmy-killed-me]

um ok write a proper piece and i mght give you a place in my writers team

 

[Razer302]

It seems ok but there isn't that much to make a really opinion on.
Will be able to give a better opinion when there is more of it.

 

[.Eevee-Chan]

CHAPTER ONE The Start of a New Friendship:
As Lea walked to the next city,Ciy Town,she felt lonely and thought maybe her feebas might feel lonely too.She decided to look for another pokemon,but the road was gray and empty.Lea took this booklet {having every city name and info on it} from her bag and read about Ciy Town.It read: Ciy Town is the home of many psychic pokemon and people that use them.Psychic pokemon help the people and in return the people give them pokemon food or play with them.She stopped reading and thought she could catch a psychic pokemon in Ciy Town.She imagined catching a girafarig and doing graceful appeals with it.Lea then walked forward {while still imagining} and accidentally bumped into a kirlia that was eating a berry.It was angry so it blasted a psychic attack on her.She lukily landed on this guy!!! Shoked, he pushed her and said," I am trying to per-fect a contest combination!!""Where did you come from anyway?!" Lea stammered,"Well,um I sota angered a wild kirlia." Guy,"One that was eating a berry?" Lea,"Yeah!!" "How did you know!?" Guy,"Well that was my kirlia!" A silent moment came until Lea asked,"Is there really a contst here?" He was gone!! She wondered where he had gone and then saw an arcanine using flamewheel and extreme speed and noticed the guy was there too. She was in awe with that wonderful appeal combo!! He noticed her and said,"I am entering with my arcanine in this town's contest." "My name is Derick,by the way." Lea,"Hi!! and my name is Lea" Derick,"So what pokemon are you going to enter?"Lea," I still need to catch one." Derick," How about i help you find one?" Lea,"Okey and thanks!!" They walked in a grassy area and found a ralts. He released his kirlia and told it to use psychic on ralts. Ralts then used teleport and went behind her leg.Derick,"It must like you!!" Lea,"Want to travel with me?" ralts agreed and shockingly took a pokeball out of her hand and went in!Derick,"i got to go!" Now that she had caught a ralts she was able to enter a pokemon contest!!

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[.Eevee-Chan]

Chapter one part two Per-fecting Appeals:

The sun was almost setting,in shades of yellow,orange,and pink.A star was then visible,so they decided to camp out.They set up their sleeping bags and laid down,gazing at the dazzaling stars in the night sky next to the grey,full moon.The sun then shined bright and ment it was day!! She slowly got up and then remembered she still needed to think of and appeal.Lea went to wake Derick up,but he was missing!! She heard his voice and felt a pat on her back. She screamed,"Don't scare me like that!!!" Derick,"I just wanted to tell you that the contest is today and to work on your appeal." Lea,"That what i was going to tell you if you wern't behind my back!!" They found Ciy Town just ahead and started running down the hill. When they made it they ran to the pokemon contest area and registered before it was too late.When they came out they both practiced their appeals.Lea sent out ralts and told it about the pokemon contest and that they will enter together.Ralts agreed.She told it to use teleport and use shadow ball,it did so and it turned out great!!. It made a huge shadow ball. She then told it to use confusion to blast the ball into small fire works. Sucess!! She had her appeal down ,but now she needed to train for the battle part.She asked Derick to battle her and her feebas to train it for the contest.They found an empty area and the battle started! He sent out hir arcanine and she sent out her feebas.Arcanine used extreme speed ,double team, and flame wheel at the same time and fainted feebas straight!!! Derick,"Like my strong yet beautiful appeal" "Train your feebas!" Lea was suprised by such attack power and grace.She then went to find wild pokemon to help train. She saw a smoochum and told feebas to use flail,instead it used a new attack,water pulse! It hit it directly!! Suddenly more of them came and a couple of Jynx too. They fled,but in joy for her feebas learned water pulse!!

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[.Eevee-Chan]

Chapter two Show It Off!:

Lea made it back to Ciy Town right before the contest.All of the people who registered went back-stage to prepare.It was her turn next.As she went on stage she hear and applouse!!She spun around then gracefuly sent out ralts.Ralts used the combo they appealed on practice.It used teleport then used shadow ball multiple times,making a huge ball.To finish it up it did confusion to blast it into pieces of glowing fire works!! The audience clapped and cheered!!She was given the score twenty five point zero out of thirty!! Derick was next and sent out his arcanine. It used extreme speed,flamewheel,and double team making multiple flames on the stage!!He was given the score thirty!! A perfect score!!! The judges sent in the results of the four trainers who made it to the next round and Lea................

well that is part of chapter two,hoped it was good!!

 

[.Eevee-Chan]

i know that chapter was short, the next part will be available tomarrow or later today.

 

[.Eevee-Chan]

Chapter two part two Battle for the Ribbon!:

Lea had made it to the next round!!! She was up against a shukle.Lea sent out her feebas and the battle started.Lea,"Feebas ues water pulse!!" Trainer,"Dodge it shuckle!!" Shuckle protected itself by using withdraw for it poor speed.Lea,"Feebas wait for it to attack,then dodge it!!" Trainer,"Shuckle ues bide!!" Lea,"What is that attack?" "Okey feebas use a direct water pulse!!" It had a critical hit and the shuckle was knocked out!!! The final match was next and she was going to battle Derick!! Before they battled they shook hands and said good luck to eachother.The time limit was all ready one minute left!! As her exhasusted ralts kept battling,and trying its hardest to impress its trainer it fainted with his kirlia's psychic attack blast! Lea had lost her first contest battle and apolagized to her ralts for her lost.Derick recieved the ribbon and asked since they are both entering contests maybe they can travel together.Lea agreed,but turned a light shade of pink.They exited the arena together traveling to the next contest.

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