Controlling Life

[Kratos]

I'm not sure if this title goes well with the poem but I don't know if I could think of a better one so here it goes...it might be kind of short....

Controlling Life
When I was weak,
You came along Elightened me,
And covered the sun,
I can never ever run,
I wish the stars would turn you in,
And leave me standing in the wind,
I wish the devil gave you up,
and all the snow would melt and fade,
So all of the pain may go away,
This is it,
I can't run away,
Your controlling my life,
And that's how it will forever stay.

I don't think this was as good as my other poems but atleast I tried.....

 

[Envy]

Oooohhh! I think it's good!*.* I most like the part where it says I can't run away,your contolling my life,and that's how it will forever stay.NICE JOB!!!^^

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

In my opinion Kratos, I like it quite a lot. I chose well to idolize you.

 

[Locke Yggdrasill]

And I just can't look, its killing me....
Heh, verynice poem. for some strange reason, it reminds me of the lyrics to Mr. Brightside.