D_M's TerrIBLE christmas and CRappy new year! (If this offends you please forgive me)

The Vince Knight

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    This is not real well some of it might be..
    I am truthfully not good at writing good very good in spelling.
    But some people know that I really am kinda bad.. I just want to type this up because I want my christmas spirit going.
    WARNING: If you like singing stay outta this thread. One more thing Please if you find this offensive I will be so sorry.

    Chapter 1: The 18th of december(7 days remain).
    It's 9:00am in the morning the bell for school rings,and I run into class because I was a little late and I had to do a bin job.
    My stupid principal Ms. Kath Ginnane,The dumb school principal,Orders us inside for a stupid assembly at 9:15. Theres birthday awards,Awards and stuff. But I had never got one that day.
    After assembly I wanted to go back inside the classroom. But our stupid EVIL Assistant of the Principal Carolyn Withers,Wants us all to sing for christmas.
    Song 1: The little drummer boy.>_>;
    "The little drummer boy Pa ra pa pum BUM" I said Even though it's supposed to be pam not bum.
    Later...
    "Shall I play for you? Pa ra pa pum BUM,Me and my BUM." I said that too... And the last bum is Drum...

    Song 2: Santa is coming to town...(Sigh)
    "You better watch out,you better not cry,you better not FART,I'm tealling you why,Santa claus is DRIVING TO FART."

    Well a long 6 hours later I was finally home....
    Coming soon Chapter 2: Playing with the tree.(6 days remain)

    I hope you give me kinda good comments. Not that bad if bad.... Thank you.
     
    I remember in school when we were forced to sing pretty much all the Christmas carols everyday before the holidays.... it wasn't really run XD.

    The spelling as you said is not very good, I suggest prove reading it before submitting the next chapter. But I do like the story, it sort of deals with things that could be real in life.
     
    ^^; I didn't see too many spelling errors as there were grammer. Just go back and, as LT said, proof read your work and try to fix it. ^____^ If you do need help with that sort of thing, I'm your gal. ^_~

    I think it's kinda cute. It does show the events that go on in school during the holidays. I think it's an overall good fic, nice work. =D

    ~Kelsey
     
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