Dash's Adventure : Aloia Chronicals

[The Dash]

Ok, so this is my new game. If your wondering why I gave up my Pokémon game it was because I was finding RM2K3 too limited. Anyway I started a RMXP game a while ago and this is it:

Story:
The world is spiralling towards chaos,
The three elementals Water,Fire,Ice and Earth have been imprisoned within Power Crystals. You along with several other freinds you will meet must find and destroy these crystals to prevent the Imminant destruction that is trailing closely behind.

Features:

• Sprint system
• On screen Health and MP veiwer
• Bios system
• (WIP) Side Veiw battle system
• Hidden fun levels where you can get special items.
• Probably more, I dunno.

Screenshots:

And finally the first special level:

Credit:
Wings - Down form of the Dash sprite.
Cypher - Pokémon tileset
Pickle/IceAxe - Some icons
Zakkaya - Some sprites
White Ark - Dash picture used in Bio screen

 

[Alistair]

Looks good, but you need to study your grammar more.

1st screenshot: Should be an A3
2nd screenshot: Should be lose
3rd screenshot: Should be an arena

Also, I noticed this in your storyline part.

The three elementals Water,Fire,Ice and Earth have been imprisoned within Power Crystals.

And two last things:

• Your storyline should be more detailed. The "save the world" storyline is kinda bland, so spice it up with some twists.
• The Pokémon graphics could use a little work. IE GameCube.

I look forward to seeing this game develop. But please be aware I am not trying to be mean, I am trying to help you make your game look and feel good.

 

[The Dash]

Of course I know your trying to help Hiccup :)
All the spelling the mistakes have been fixed and as for the Pokémon graphics..I diden't make them.

How would you suggest I make the story line more detailed?

 

[AmaranthProject]

I've said this in alot of games, and ill say it again the maps need more detail... The pokemon version room, in my mind is perfect I like how you made the shading which I dont see quite often. The places where you used the rmxp RTP tiles are too plain, but its probally because alot of the tilesets are horrible giving you limited choices. Wish you luck on the game kinda sounds like Golden Sun, but meh :S .

 

[The Dash]

Most of the RTP tilesets will be changed anyway, I agree they are too limited.

 

[zidanes]

The pokemon scene looks pretty funny. I hope more parts of the game will be that way.

 

[The Dash]

Yeah I'm planning to make bonus levels of: Pokémon,Lego,Megaman and possibly Mario

 

[DarkDoom3000]

wow, cool pokemon lego megaman and mario!!!

i really need a break from normal pokemon game.....

ill b watching!
keep it up

 

[Alistair]

How would you suggest I make the story line more detailed?

Add a quirky twist to the storyline. Or add something that makes it uniquely yours.