steel_pscyho612
Banned
- 91
- Posts
- 18
- Years
- Mt.Coronet
- Seen Jan 16, 2008
Okay since my old fanfic about metagross got closed, a figure i'll just start all over again and make a different fanfic with mostly different characters (except for dylan). Well this story is about...nevermind, you'll read this story for yourself
Dylan And Jason
Rated PG
Chapter one- Magnemite
"Go Skarmory, finish this with steel wing!" Dylan shouted.
"Oh well, it was a good battle," the hiker started, "here you go, as promised, a moon stone."
"Thanks alot!" Dylan retorted.
"That battle was so cool Dylan, it made me itching to get a skarmory!" Jason shouted.
"No way, steel pokemon are my thing," he started, "and i will stop at-" he began until he was cut off by a voice.
"If you want steel pokemon, i'd suggest go to New Mauville." the voice said.
Neither knew where it was coming from, nor did they know who was saying, but i'm getting to ahead of myself, I never described the two boys myself. Dylan was 13 years old on a pokemon journey with his best friend Jason. Dylan weighed 102 pounds and stood at 5'3. At the moment he only had his Skarmory, but he was determined to have the best steel team ever, a team even better than Steven Stone's steel team. Jason was also 13 weighed 99 pounds and stood at 5'1. He had a tyrouge and a poliwag, and he was determined to have the best fighting team, one even better than brunos. Anyway, thats all you need to know about them. Dylan had just defeated a hiker and his 3 pokemon with his skarmory. And right now he was going to Mauville, and then to New Mauville to get the steel pokemon that the voice had talked about and a 30 minute walk, they were in Mauville.
"Woah, look at it, its so...so..." Jason started.
"Hi-Tech!" Dylan finished for him.
"Yeah, look they have a casino, a gym, lots of restaraunts, and most importantly-" Jason started.
"New Mauville, the little building off the coast of Mauville, and thats where we are going first, if i want my steel team to be complete, and if want to get my 3rd gym badge, i need to get my pokemon team shipshape!" Dylan said.
"You know this badge'll be tough to get, its not compared to roxanne and brawley, there you had the steel-rock and flying-fighting advantage, but now, with electric being the gym type, your at a disadvantage." Jason stated.
"Yeah, yeah, i know, i know. Dylan retorted, come on lets go, we can swim out there"
Dylan ran to the shore of Mauville where the two places intersected. Jason caught up soon after.
"Now what are we gonna do genuis? Jason said. "We can't swim in our clothes."
"All I care about, Jason, Is my shirt getting wet, my shorts can get wet, they can be replaced." Dylan retorted while pulling his shirt off over his head.
"Fine, then lets go!" Jason said while removing his shirt.
This area that they were in was actually quite beatiful. There were beautiful flowers growing, and tons of trees with helpful berries on them, Jason looked at them and though about picking them when he got out. But all that Dylan was interested in was that steel type pokemon in New Mauville, after about 5 minutes of swimming, they got to New Mauville. Normally it was locked, but for some reason this time it wasn't. They pushed open the door and walked inside.
"Woah, this place is pretty, practical." said the dissapointed Dylan.
But after he said that a group of magenemites ran flew past them.
"A MAGNEMITE! A MAGNEMITE! THATS THE STEEL POKEMON AND ITS MINE!" Dylan exclaimed.
Dylan ran up to it and threw his great ball at it. It shook once, but after that it came out of its ball. The pack was mad and out from the shadows came the mama magenton.
"Uh-oh, Jason, i think we should-" Dylan started.
"Stand right here, we came this far, and were not turning back, Go Tyrouge!" Jason retorted.
A flash of white light appeared before the two figures, and then the tyrogue appeared from the light.
"Yeah, now go use karate chop on that Magneton!" exclaimed Jason.
"I gotta help out, go skarmory, use night slah on the magneton also." Dylan shouted.
"Magne-magneton!" the scared magneton shouted as the two pokemon came after it, and in one shot, it was defeated.
"Now tyrogue, use karate shop on the magnemite." he said.
"Now go, poke ball!" Dylan exclaimed.
The pokeball shook once, shook twice, shoot a third time and then click! the magnemite was caught.
"YEAH! Thanks Jason, i could not have done it without ya." He said.
"Yeah, yeah, but remember you owe me."
So what did you think of chapter one? was it long enough?
Dylan And Jason
Rated PG
Chapter one- Magnemite
"Go Skarmory, finish this with steel wing!" Dylan shouted.
"Oh well, it was a good battle," the hiker started, "here you go, as promised, a moon stone."
"Thanks alot!" Dylan retorted.
"That battle was so cool Dylan, it made me itching to get a skarmory!" Jason shouted.
"No way, steel pokemon are my thing," he started, "and i will stop at-" he began until he was cut off by a voice.
"If you want steel pokemon, i'd suggest go to New Mauville." the voice said.
Neither knew where it was coming from, nor did they know who was saying, but i'm getting to ahead of myself, I never described the two boys myself. Dylan was 13 years old on a pokemon journey with his best friend Jason. Dylan weighed 102 pounds and stood at 5'3. At the moment he only had his Skarmory, but he was determined to have the best steel team ever, a team even better than Steven Stone's steel team. Jason was also 13 weighed 99 pounds and stood at 5'1. He had a tyrouge and a poliwag, and he was determined to have the best fighting team, one even better than brunos. Anyway, thats all you need to know about them. Dylan had just defeated a hiker and his 3 pokemon with his skarmory. And right now he was going to Mauville, and then to New Mauville to get the steel pokemon that the voice had talked about and a 30 minute walk, they were in Mauville.
"Woah, look at it, its so...so..." Jason started.
"Hi-Tech!" Dylan finished for him.
"Yeah, look they have a casino, a gym, lots of restaraunts, and most importantly-" Jason started.
"New Mauville, the little building off the coast of Mauville, and thats where we are going first, if i want my steel team to be complete, and if want to get my 3rd gym badge, i need to get my pokemon team shipshape!" Dylan said.
"You know this badge'll be tough to get, its not compared to roxanne and brawley, there you had the steel-rock and flying-fighting advantage, but now, with electric being the gym type, your at a disadvantage." Jason stated.
"Yeah, yeah, i know, i know. Dylan retorted, come on lets go, we can swim out there"
Dylan ran to the shore of Mauville where the two places intersected. Jason caught up soon after.
"Now what are we gonna do genuis? Jason said. "We can't swim in our clothes."
"All I care about, Jason, Is my shirt getting wet, my shorts can get wet, they can be replaced." Dylan retorted while pulling his shirt off over his head.
"Fine, then lets go!" Jason said while removing his shirt.
This area that they were in was actually quite beatiful. There were beautiful flowers growing, and tons of trees with helpful berries on them, Jason looked at them and though about picking them when he got out. But all that Dylan was interested in was that steel type pokemon in New Mauville, after about 5 minutes of swimming, they got to New Mauville. Normally it was locked, but for some reason this time it wasn't. They pushed open the door and walked inside.
"Woah, this place is pretty, practical." said the dissapointed Dylan.
But after he said that a group of magenemites ran flew past them.
"A MAGNEMITE! A MAGNEMITE! THATS THE STEEL POKEMON AND ITS MINE!" Dylan exclaimed.
Dylan ran up to it and threw his great ball at it. It shook once, but after that it came out of its ball. The pack was mad and out from the shadows came the mama magenton.
"Uh-oh, Jason, i think we should-" Dylan started.
"Stand right here, we came this far, and were not turning back, Go Tyrouge!" Jason retorted.
A flash of white light appeared before the two figures, and then the tyrogue appeared from the light.
"Yeah, now go use karate chop on that Magneton!" exclaimed Jason.
"I gotta help out, go skarmory, use night slah on the magneton also." Dylan shouted.
"Magne-magneton!" the scared magneton shouted as the two pokemon came after it, and in one shot, it was defeated.
"Now tyrogue, use karate shop on the magnemite." he said.
"Now go, poke ball!" Dylan exclaimed.
The pokeball shook once, shook twice, shoot a third time and then click! the magnemite was caught.
"YEAH! Thanks Jason, i could not have done it without ya." He said.
"Yeah, yeah, but remember you owe me."
So what did you think of chapter one? was it long enough?
